Pauline (aka Clover)

[kenny mac]

This is absolutely fantastic.
Your storytelling is top notch as is your production.
The lyrics just drop right into place effortlessly.
Extraordinarily captivating.
Dark and thought provoking story of the twisted world we live in.
Well done.

[Trist]

You sound so different on this Ray i like the almost spoken word style of it, The rhythm and bass is so cool, the song is real dark and ominous in a groove way which really suits the lyrics, You have a great imagination the lyrics are excellent and that is a killer last line, pardon the pun. you do some great song themes .

[launched]

The menacing bass line and the guitar rings really set the tone, very theatrical. The lyrical content is well presented and thought out, pure synergy all of it together!

Great tune, I really enjoyed it!

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

Wow, this is really "real" , those lyrics are heart wrenching. Especially when you know there are people like poor Pauline.
What a song though..brilliantly recorded and performed Ray.
More people need to hear your songs mate.