All Of Our Fathers by Ray

Started by Ray Brookes, March 16, 2023, 03:54:34 AM

Ray Brookes

all of our fathers
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All of our fathers
Want us to follow their directions
And we finding new boundaries to push
But the conflicts don't amount to much
All of our fathers
Hope we make the right connections
Ready to do whatever it takes
To ensure we don't make the same mistakes
Mother sitting quietly
Feeling everyone's pain
Fathers want us on their own familiar track
But we're on a different train.

All of our fathers
Old values never eroding
Some ethics and morals from another planet
Good manners engraved in granite
All of our fathers
Some disappointments inploding
Peers over the top of the newspaper - frowns
As we all try to establish our own grounds
Mother sitting quietly
Knit one, pearl one watching every stitch
She knows there is right and wrong
Now she's not sure about which is which.

Mother sitting quietly
The soft-cover novel suddenly enthralling
Father and son face to face
She ready to catch whoever's falling
And all parents there holding their breath
Sometimes things are as good as they get .....
Ray Brookes

Groundy

Pure class, Ray I really enjoyed this.

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My goodness, this is an absolute treasure! Great music, and that piano work is amazing. "Mother sitting quietly" - It used to be like that. The keeper of the family. Not so much anymore...

Sweeeeeet tune!!
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chapperz66

Beautiful in every way, Ray.  The lyrical imagery is wonderful and the guitar solo is pure gold.

Brilliant as usual!

Paul

Frank53

A very moving song, Ray. Great expression of the generational conflict, all meaning well.
Beautiful music. Nice change in mood and chord structure for 'mother'.
Nice arrangement. Love when the piano comes in, the acoustic solo, the strings, and bringing in just a touch of fretless bass. Nice work!
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Mike_S

Feeling a really deep connection with this, those lyrics are great, especially the lines about the mother, beautiful. I'd say many of us can kinda relate to the scenes here. Lovely Ray.

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Bluesberry

You write such deep and meaningful songs.........incredible songwriting and recording going down here

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BerryPatch

Beautiful song Ray! I really love the chords here. It has a latter day Pink Floyd feel with perhaps a touch of early Kate Bush. Excellent lyrics, I hung on to every line! Fabulous production, a bit different from usual but really creative and stripped back.

Redler

Great intro with really mellow sounscape! Piano and acoustic guitar solo sounds so good. So well written song, both musically and lyrically.
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DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

Your lyrics are always amazing ray. beautiful written and sang. I like the vocal effect on your voice, gives it that dreamlike, reflective quality.
It's great the way the music starts off quietly and builds upon to the solo, then eases back down the the ending.
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Thanks for listening.