Wee ballad needs lyrics and vocals

[Redler]

Hello everyone!

Here's a ballad, a bit over 2 minutes and I need vocals for it (again). There's two guitars and some TJ cello additions...

Intro to 10 seconds spot. Outro with or without vocals, up to you.I recorded two versions and couldn't decide which one is better. Wav track is available....
A version by Trevor: https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=33514.0
A version by Mike Huntingford: https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?PHPSESSID=39024ff986fdc4e74dc28c3842c8a229&topic=33549.0

[Redler]

[Mike Huntingford]

[url="https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;attach=194601;type=preview;file"]Ballad23mp.mp3[/url]

Hello everyone!

Here's a ballad, a bit over 2 minutes and I need vocals for it (again). There's two guitars and some TJ cello additions...

Intro to 10 seconds spot. Outro with or without vocals, up to you.I recorded two versions and couldn't decide which one is better. Wav track is available....

[url="https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;attach=194600;type=preview;file"]balla2d3mp.mp3[/url]

Hey Sir,

I played with a rough idea (see attached). I hear this song staying as a playful demi-classical piece. In this rough idea, pls excuse my timings, I have added a Cello for some bass, an English horn for melody, and a violin for melody.  Let me know what you think. I can flesh it out better. I got rid of some guitar string pluck peaks.

Mike

[Redler]

In this rough idea, pls excuse my timings, I have added a Cello for some bass, an English horn for melody, and a violin for melody.  Let me know what you think. I can flesh it out better. I got rid of some guitar string pluck peaks.

Mike

Hi Mike! Your additions sounds great. In my opinion the timing was very good. I recorded the song on 120 bpm, started at third measure, but cut the silent spot off at the start. I have the original track still on my PC, if needed. Thanks for the excellent job, Mike!

[Mike Huntingford]

In this rough idea, pls excuse my timings, I have added a Cello for some bass, an English horn for melody, and a violin for melody.  Let me know what you think. I can flesh it out better. I got rid of some guitar string pluck peaks.

Mike

Hi Mike! Your additions sounds great. In my opinion the timing was very good. I recorded the song on 120 bpm, started at third measure, but cut the silent spot off at the start. I have the original track still on my PC, if needed. Thanks for the excellent job, Mike!

Glad you liked the adds. So, would you like this fleshed out in a better quality version? Do you want to send me the wav file?

Mike

[Hilary]

Beautiful!