My Dear

[Lord_Thunderbuns]

Hey y'all, this a dirty recording/mastering of one of my original songs. It's part of a bigger album I'm working ease give me any constructive criticism you want. Keep in mind that it's probably going to be redone from scratch haha. Songs called, My Dear.

[launched]

Fits my mood perfectly right now. The vox, chord work and phrasing are great. And it gets strong!! Then settles down with precision. Then get's strong!!

"I don't want to miss you" - That is powerful.

Well done, friggin' awesome!

[SE]

Cool acoustic sound, nice recording of the guitar,good rise and fall too.
Would love to hear it when you've  given it a full production, all in all enjoyed it lots!

[StephenM]

What a voice and I really enjoy the dynamics you employ.  The song has to be intensely personal.  It feels real.  Like a song of going through the phases of grief and finally letting go...
but there is a lot of hope in this as well...

I will be looking forward to other things you do!  Plus the guitar sounds great also

[BerryPatch]

Very cool track, these kind of folky songs ooze with such atmosphere. When you do this song as a full on production it would be cool if you kept this vibe. Excellent chord modulations throughout...

[Groundy]

Nice one, great vox...

[Zoltan]

Sounds great! Lots of talent.

[Johnbee]

Welcome to the forum.
Great songwriting.  Great voice. Sounds very close to your heart.

  John B

[Ron D Bowes]

Good composition and good performance. LIke this a lot. And welcome.

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Welcome to the forum, great acoustic sound and vocals. Willie