Brown Submarine

[Zoltan]

I know i'm posting too much and contributing too little, but i'm trying to bump up my numbers before the end is nigh! I mean the year ends

I got inspired for this song because of Stephens underwater adventures + the talk about lot lizards (!). I can't really sing this, but i did a scratch vocals for it. If someone wants to sing it proper it's here for taking!

Brown Submarine

I was living in a submarine
Felt more like bathtub to me
I was talking to my friend Fox
While she was posing in a magazine

Life divided by three
Six in the morning
Until the coffin calls
Underwater for 90 days
Lack of oxygen breaks my brain

CH:
Brown submarine alert / VOCODER PART
Brown submarine
Uranus rising (ha ha ha) / VOCODER PART
Brown submarine
Stupid song alert / VOCODER PART
Lot lizard approaching underwater / VOCODER PART

V2 (repeats the first)

CH 2:
Missile silo
Brown submarine
It's either danger, or boring as hell
Brown submarine
Missile silo
It's either danger, or boring as hell

Outro:
Lochness monster is real
We can see it approaching it's not a dinosaur
It's a lot lizard aaargh!
Easter bunny come and save us!

[Ted]

I figured there was a tie-in to Stephen, even before I read the post.

You have a very short musical digestive tract, Zoltan. Stuff passes through you quickly. Already a reference to a lot lizard! Impressive! A-A-R-G-H!

A unique and captivating sound, mosquito-like electronic noises weaving in and out of the mix. The robotic vocoder vocals give it a retro-futuristic 1980's new wave feel.  It's the Loch Ness Monster of songs - elusive and mysterious, but utterly mesmerizing.

The vocals are mixed kind of low. Okay, not "kind of," but way too low.

[StephenM]

this is so fun... and so funny... those lyrics are true...either danger or boring...yup... danger and insane behavior amidst the drudgery of normal life.. it there could be such a thing as that underwater..

lot lizards...that cracks me up... "Easter bunny come and save US"... that is a great ending to a crazy song...
i dig the vocals but then yes...as Ted says I generally think they can be louder..

that beat you get though is so Electronica and punches holes in me...

brown submarine...I am trying to play drums along with this.

[Rene Asologuitar]

Very fun and joyful song.
I was instantly thinking Beatles, and was happily surprised by this creation.
Thanks for sharing this beauty.
Happy New Year!
Rene

[launched]

Funny how certain people migrate toward the spook. Excellent demo. Box of Frogs mad. There actually was a band called that with Yardbirds members, Jimmy Page and Jeff Beck played on some tracks. I think I still have the tape, probably worth a million pesos, that's like 12 bucks isn't it? I remember being a teenager riding down the trail belting out "Poor Boy" on a snowmobile that couldn't have broken 10MPH I swear (16.09344KPH to the rest of the world). And Jeff Beck did the slide, which I had his albums too at 14.

Anyway, I really liked this, sorry to get off topic. Very good tune!

[Frank53]

Odd...oddly entertaining. I missed the inspiration for this, but the music is fun, and the lyrics are a hoot. Nicely arranged. Put a good smile on my face. All I can say is a-a-a-r-g-h! 

[Bluesberry]

Outstanding spandex pop here Zolt-an......I can dig it....as Mark says, migrate toward the spook.......for definite....I love what you have conjured here........short musical digestive track.....that's quite an image......spandex spook pop.....yeah

[StephenM]

Zoltan misses absolutely no details in this lyric and song presentation...
all of this is so crazy