"In einem traum" a Google Translate original by Geir and Jarle

Started by Geir, October 14, 2022, 05:04:27 PM

Geir

Geir&Jarle - In einem traum
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Apologies in advance to all of those whose languages we abuse.

This is written by the two of us in Norwegian and translated mainly to English and German, but also bits to Finnish, Italian and Ukrainian.

Every word except the Norwegian is translated by google.

The song is inspired by the mountains where it's written and is also a cry for peace.

We share the vocal and acoustic guitar duties. I added some bass, kick drum and baglama and my brother added an old washboard.


P.S. we only speak some English and a bit German the rest is all thanks to google translate.

P.P.S. The lyrics came about by me starting off with 2 lines. The I showed the last line to my brother who wrote two more and then only showing the last to me. Then we continued this until the verse was done. The chorus we wrote together after reading the finished verse.


Jeg gikk en tur på min egen sti
Ned en Bakke og opp ei li
Bakken er er lang og stien er glatt
Jeg setter meg ned og føler meg matt
Jeg fyrer et bål med noen bjørkepinner
Koker opp kaffen mens hodet spinner
Kroppen streiker og tankene presser
Livet flyr fort og makta messer

I en drøm
Ser jeg ingen gjerder
En verden
Uten geværer

I went for a walk on my own path
Down a hill and up a hill
The hill is long and the path is smooth
I sit down and feel dull
I make a fire with some birch sticks
Makes the coffee while your head spins
The body is on strike and the mind is pressing
Life flies fast and the power fairs

In a dream
I don't see any fences
A world
Without guns

Ich bin auf meinem eigenen Weg spazieren gegangen
Berg runter und Berg hoch
Der Hügel ist lang und der Weg ist glatt
Ich setze mich hin und fühle mich matt
Ich mache ein Feuer mit ein paar Birkenstöcken
Macht den Kaffee, während dir der Kopf schwirrt
Der Körper streikt und der Geist drängt
Das Leben vergeht schnell und die Macht ist misst

In einem Traum
Ich sehe keine Zäune
Eine Welt
Ohne Waffen

Unessa
En näe aitoja.  .  .
Maailma
Ilman aseita
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I en drøm
Ser jeg ingen gjerder
Un mondo
Senza pistole

In a dream
I don't see any fences
Eine Welt
Ohne Waffen

I en drøm
Ser jeg ingen gjerder
Maailma
Ilman aseita

In a dream
I don't see any fences
Svit...
Bez zbroyi
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Oh well ........

Zoltan

Bravo Geir! This was well done :) I can't speak for everybody, but at least those finnish parts were easily understood!(* In my ears most of the German lyrics worked ok and the same for the small bits in Italian.

The message in the lyrics is also universal so i think you put the Google fest into a good use.

(* The song i did in "Swedish" was mostly for the sound. I didn't bother even trying to pronounce all the words, or check how they're supposed to be pronounced. Some i knew, but the ones i didn't... I just goofballed it :D

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Trist

I enjoyed this song, the languages an performance, especially liked when the percussion came in later in the track.

cuthbert

Great to hear another one from the Alfsen brothers. Cool idea to have multiple language translations! Very nice mix of instruments, too - I can also hear the baglamas!

Loved it!
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des0free

Really nice song and performances (and lyrics - the parts I could read...)!  Interesting choice to put in an array of multiple different languages.  Do you have an "original" version in just Norwegian - if you do, please post, I would love to hear that too!
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Flash Harry

Utterly brilliant!!

Absolutamente brillante!

Tout à fait brillant

Absolut brillant

Абсолютно блискуче

Bravo mes amis!
We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different
- Kurt Vonnegut.

StephenM

this is beyond good.... wow...  stunned.  The english was very good in my opinion.
 
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DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

Really good song. Great music all round, I love the translation idea. We'll done.
Darren
I have 2 profiles on this site, (NOW COMBINED INTO ONE PROFILE PAGE)
 One is a musical partnership with Keith Allen, ( we record songs as "The Devil's Toupee").
The 2nd one is for my other musical projects and collaborations. (DarrenG)
Thanks for listening.

maxit

Fantastic song and very powerful, potente! Puissant! Should be singed quite everywhere right now ...
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BerryPatch

This is sooo good guys! I love the idea for this festival and you guys really went all out here with the many languages present. I love the additional harmonies and mandolin too, the slow burn structure of the song is brilliant!