Done (3/4)

[maxit]

By Cecilia and me, another 'waltz' ...

Done

By the time you played girls like your drums
I was already working the hours of a CEO
yet here you are pointing guns
as if I'm the reason why you're an average Joe
Stop putting the blame on everybody else
Need an enemy? look at yourself
I'm so done, done
Counting my breaths, watching my steps
Now I'm done, done
with being afraid of every word I say
You're not the hero of this story
you're just like me, blood sweat and tears
I'm so done

[Ron D Bowes]

Celia's voice reminds me of Maria Muldua. Quirky little number that goes punky. Divided into sections like a mini rock opera. Nicely done!

[TPB]

Great collab the keys are a perfect fit for the vocal in the opening then the punk section opens nice twist
Tim

[StephenM]

simply amazing and I really like the vocal deliv and the lyrics... wasn't expecting that overcompressed distorted voc or however you did that...
really good
sounds great to this average Joe...

[Farrell Jackson]

This is a quite good but contrasting versions of two songs that seem sewn together. Each has its own likability qualities. I'm wondering if the middle, punkish version, was the first demo or the other way around? No matter, I enjoyed listening to both!

[maxit]

Ok, ceci wrote the first piano version, she claimed it was an 'angry' song. Then she kinda quitted the song but it was too good, so I tought about a contrasting middle to make it longer. I wanted to shout, scream but i record in my home so the punk/stoned version came out lol

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

What a great, quirky song, i like the change of styles.

[StephenM]

this song really gets me...it's very creative, putting these ideas together... kind of like a lighter version of thunder following lightning...
it's what I would say is theatric... I could hear this as a musical track in a musical play...super!!!!
also love Cecelia's voice

[Pru]

fabulous composition and super playing and singing.