Will You Choose, Collab Project with danthecoat

Started by Rene Asologuitar, August 29, 2022, 10:17:45 AM

Rene Asologuitar

Will You Choose
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Will You Choose is born as a Collaboration Project from Danny aka "Theforgotten toy box" aka "danthecoat" from "Songcrafters.org".
His idea came in as a chord progression, and some melody lines.
His graciousness and generosity allowed me free reins on any direction I need to go in terms of lyrics and melody.

The tune inspired me to write about our choices in life, and the possibilities we gain if we choose to embrace and believe.

This song is dedicated to all suffering peoples of our world, especially the dying and the sick.  Peace, hope, and consolation fill your hearts and mind.

/Users/reneabadesco/Desktop/Will You Choose 2.mp3
Will You Choose.mp3


https://youtu.be/Ss8egD4k4JM




Or my YouTube Channel:
"https://www.youtube.com/c/rannildo"


Will you become, what you should be
Embrace His love, carry your cross
His Resurrection, our eternal salvation
Choose to follow, embrace His love

Questions unanswered, don't be confused
He has the answers, just heed His words
Paths of life, told in the parables
Open your mind, hear His voice

You and I, we are blinded 
By world's riches and glory defined
Now's the time to understand   
His words are truth   

Something went wrong, we all sense it
Things aren't the way they should be
We aren't as kind, as generous, and loving
We are selfish, arrogant and cruel

We can't escape, sin's all around us
We are sinners, we are weak
We tried on our own, were caught in a cycle
Only in Him, if you choose to believe


Hook

Very nice song. I keep missing your posts because they aren't in the jukeboxes. You should really upload an mp3 as well as the youtube link.
More people will see/hear your post.
Rock on!

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Ray Brookes

Where is the song, Rene? Can you post it as an MP3?
Ray Brookes

StephenM

so glad Rene you got the stuff corrected so that these play on the Jukeboxes... this is a wonderful colab. 

Dan is a favorite of mine and you as well... it's a great topic of lyric and the vocals are so lovely... so pure...so sweet..

the guitar sounds divine! 

reminds me of the old hippy line of "make love, not war"...

so glad I can download these.

 
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Rene Asologuitar

Quote from: Hook on August 29, 2022, 10:59:04 AMVery nice song. I keep missing your posts because they aren't in the jukeboxes. You should really upload an mp3 as well as the youtube link.
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Hi Hook,
Success!!!
I am now able to attach the mp3 version!
Thanks for the push, love it!!!
Rene
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Quote from: Ray Brookes on August 29, 2022, 08:35:06 PMWhere is the song, Rene? Can you post it as an MP3?
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Hi Ray,
I got the mp3 song in.
Hope you like it.
Rene
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Quote from: StephenM on September 08, 2022, 09:25:49 AMso glad Rene you got the stuff corrected so that these play on the Jukeboxes... this is a wonderful colab. 
Dan is a favorite of mine and you as well... it's a great topic of lyric and the vocals are so lovely... so pure...so sweet..
the guitar sounds divine! 
reminds me of the old hippy line of "make love, not war"...
so glad I can download these.
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Hi Stephen,
Thank you for the wonderful feedback.
I always enjoy your comments!
When Dan asked me to complete his song idea, I did not know what to expect.
He had a chord progression, and I filled in the lyrics and the melody which fitted in like a glove.
Thanks again, for the solid support and all the inspiration!!!
Respectfully,
Rene

TPB

Smooth as silk gents loving it playing vocals everything is perfect Rene way to hit the note on truth
Bravo Tim
Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

Ray Brookes

A very nice song, Rene and a great collaboration. Lovely clear recording and performed excellently.
Ray Brookes

Ron D Bowes

Very nice. Great voice and strumming. As we say - cool clab.

Rene Asologuitar

Quote from: TPB on September 09, 2022, 12:51:35 PMSmooth as silk gents loving it playing vocals everything is perfect Rene way to hit the note on truth
Bravo Tim
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HI Tim,
Dan did a great job getting me into the song.
Thanks Tim, for the lovely comments, especially the high note on truth!!!
Love 'em.
Rene
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Quote from: Ray Brookes on September 09, 2022, 01:29:56 PMA very nice song, Rene and a great collaboration. Lovely clear recording and performed excellently.
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Hi Ray,
Always great to hear your wonderful comments, Ray!
Huge compliments, especially from you.
Thank you.
Rene
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Quote from: Ron D Bowes on September 10, 2022, 11:02:03 AMVery nice. Great voice and strumming. As we say - cool clab.
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Hi Ron,
Lovely and loved comments.
Trying to get my act together, just to keep up with your excellent productions, especially your recent recording, very professional!!!
Thank you!
Rene

DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

This is a beautiful song from both of you. I love the guitar melody, the strumming/ picking is just great. And your lyrics and vocals are so good Rene. Yes it's also good you posted the mp3 version. Thanks
Darren
I have 2 profiles on this site, (NOW COMBINED INTO ONE PROFILE PAGE)
 One is a musical partnership with Keith Allen, ( we record songs as "The Devil's Toupee").
The 2nd one is for my other musical projects and collaborations. (DarrenG)
Thanks for listening.