Smoke 'em If You Got 'Em

[Zoltan]

Aargh! This is doing my head in Been slaving around this idea for a few hours for the Psychedelic Fest, but the verse vocals are giving me the blues. I wouldn't want to rap them and the only ideas i seem to get are borderline rap stuff.

I'm posting the demo on the second post so it doesn't show on the player...

[Zoltan]

Here's the song demo.

[StephenM]

seems like psychedelic electronica blues rock to me..... those drums are killer. 
defo has times it veers toward the doors and hendrix... so that is way enough for the fest for me.... I dig it.. killer ....stuff...
you smoked this one ...

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

I like the overall sound. Some great performances. Love the guitars and drums. Nice psychedelic vibe in places. I think you could maybe use the verse parts as the chorus and the chorus as the verses? I'm sure you'll work it out.
Darren

[Greeny]

I think this is cool as it is. The main verse riff part has enough character and interest to stand alone. I didn't find myself missing lyrics on those parts as they already have a decent hook.

Not sure what you're worried about - I'd post it to the fest as it is. It's a very entertaining song and performance :-)

[Redler]

Cool riffs and the drum track works extremely well!! A really toe tapper!

Excellent job!

[Ray Brookes]

Killer drum track and cool overall vibe, well suited to the fest. Defo a Doors feel. I agree with Tim - this is cool as it is and has plenty of character.