Spaceman ..

[BerryPatch]

This truly is wonderful GQC. I too think that the lyrics in here are perfect and don't need to be any longer. It tells the complete story within such a short amount of time. Excellent structure here too going from a sparse, spacey ballad to full on space rock in the middle section. Loved it!

[AndyR]

Thanks for the feedback ..
For the vocals I'm using EMvoice this is why is sounds a bit synthetic .
I'm a really bad singer so for now I'm using EMvoice until maybe someday I can sing properly

Thanks and have a great day

Ah! That explains it (just came here from Noir) ... listening to this again before I got to this comment, I recognise the voice now!
What a fabulous piece of technology.

And I still love this song

[Greeny]

The synthesised voice really works well on this like a deliberate choice. There's something about your delivery and songwriting that reminds me of the great Canadian band Klaatu (Calling occupants...). And maybe the subject matter too. Nice interplay between the ambient deep-space keys and the guitar section. If I were to add more I'd crank up those guitars again for a massive finale. That's just me though. It's lovely as it is! Very fine work.

[chapperz66]

Brilliant stuff.  I really love the almost vocoder-like quality to the plaintive vocals.

[Ray Brookes]

A beautifully constructed song and excellent production. Lovely spacey vibe and the synthetic voice works perfectly IMO.

[Johnbee]

This is really good.  I just hopped on the Emvoice bandwagon myself.  It has the potential to be a great program, especially for the price.  It still does does sound a bit artificial, but better than most of these types of plugins on the market that are more expensive.  I'm glad that they say that once we've bought into it all the upgrades and improvements will be free for us.  But your track is very nice and the emvoice fits nicely into the atmosphere of the song. 
You might want to check out my first project I just posted.  It is not better than yours.  It's my first attempt.
https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=32475.0

  John B

[Redler]

So good piano/vocal part, really atmospheric vibe, heavy sounds works nicely in the middle, too.

Enjoyable listening!