Think of You (Original)

Started by Saijinn Maas, June 12, 2009, 04:31:40 AM

Saijinn Maas



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Ok... My wife and I just had our 12th year anniversary. So I wrote this for her.

This is SO far out of my comfort zone though.

not too happy with the overall arrangement. There should be an intro and I think it should end differently.


OsCKilO

Great Track!

I see you stuck to the Anniversary song Music Guide!

See Below.......



Seriously though, Great Job!

Peace


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Greeny

I like the way this bounces along - pretty catchy stuff! Nice work. Those little bass turnarounds are great. You should be pleased as punch with this.

launched

This was a great arrangement - it builds up well. I agree that the tune is catchy and the bassline flows good. Great guitar work.

I also noticed that your vocal work blended together better toward the end, probably because after several takes you were more relaxed - I'm a little envious.

You should be proud of this one.

Later,

Mark
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Rockatron

Hey Saijinn!  Great drum arrangements on this one!  Catchy and great rythym chosen.  Hard for me to hear the words well though but great work man!
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SE

Hey nice tune, have been known to write the odd lovey dovy myself so know where your coming from hope the old trouble and strife likes it.
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galestermusic

First congrats on 12 years! This ode to the ones that keep us grounded pretty much sums it up.  Great piece blares trumpets in its simplicity! :)

OsCKilO

Second Listen.....

Love The Harmonies!!!!!

Structure is Brilliant too!

Despite it's simplicity, It is more complicated than Osckilo knows.......

We can learn alot from you!


Peace


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Kody

This is awesome, Saijinn!!!  I like it alot, man~
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Bluesberry

A good, well constructed song for sure.

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