time goes on

[TPB]

Been mucking with this too long Could use some Keys or a little lead work feel free if anybody wants to take a crack at it
Tim

[Ray Brookes]

Nice groove here, Tim and cool vocal work. I agree - maybe some lead or keys would ice the cake.

[StephenM]

I love absolutely love the guitar sound and progression...

amazing!  When you started singing I was thinking wow...reminds me of the great Natalie Merchant or maybe Patti Smith...the style, the way you are singing... Tim you have written lots of great songs...The ending is perfect too...  right out of the gate this one has taken me off!  I'll be listening to this a bunch...  standing ovation! bravo