Bad Whiskey (Needs vocals and stuff)

[Zoltan]

Here's a rough sketch. I was originally going to redo an old song of mine that i never finished called BAD WHISKEY. But then i got sidetracked and the backing turned into something else The lyrics still fit, but the bassline took it into an another direction.

The original lyrics were:

BAD WHISKEY

Yesterday i got the funk
Today i got the blues
Everybody thought she was really hot
Don't believe those fools

CH:
The carpets don't match the curtains
And i can't take it no more
That woman's like a bad whiskey
Don't drink her no more

This is up for grabs if someone would like to do vocals for it. I think this would need quite agressive vocals... The lyrics can be done from scratch.
I was intentionally pushing it towards something in the vein of Samhain (One of Danzigs bands). So it isn't meant to be pretty sounding

The tempo is 130bpm.

[TPB]

I like it great backer may play around with it if I get some time
Tim

[Hilary]

I'm bumping this - did anyone ever do anything with this?

[Ted]

This morning would have been a great time to discover this. I have cold and was coughing all night last night, and woke up really hoarse. I was singing raspy vocals before breakfast. With any luck I'll be coughing again tonight.

[Hilary]

I'm going to give this a whirl

[des0free]

Howdy - I was doing a rare browse of the collaboration board after posting and came across your backing track which I like. For fun I did an attempt at singing your lyrics. I tried to sound tough - and I do think I managed to sound tougher than Air Supply    I realized that my understanding of song composition is so weak that I wasn't totally sure where to sing the verse and chorus - so maybe I did not sing in the intended places    Oh well, it was fun.  And I got a chance to experiment with my JJP Vocals and CLA Effects plugins. 
 

[launched]

52 seconds of pure awesomeness. I listened again and now got almost two minutes of pure awesomeness. A third and I'll get a full song I guess.

Did anyone else do something with this, it's good.

[Zoltan]

Thanks for the comments

And yes! Hilary did a home run with this:

https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=32826

[Bluesberry]

Sweet traxxxxx man

[launched]

Found it, thought it was great!