Silk .. a more romantic song ..

Started by godinqc, January 05, 2022, 09:35:46 AM

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When my wife listens to my songs she often mentions that my Lyrics are a bit David Bowie "ish" since I write about planets and space often .. so she mentioned why don't you write a more romantic song for a change.
So here's my version of a more romantic song ..  :)

Lyrics:
Sitting by the window
Thinking of my love
And how lucky I am
Her beautiful smile
Her beautiful soul
Her black hair floating
As we drive to paradise
I see her
I love her
Soul mate Forever

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Ray Brookes

Nice romantic song for sure with poetic lyrics and some great guitar work. Cool production too; well done.
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StephenM

so the question is will she let you sing it to her? 

love the guitars here....wow...this is lovely for sure... would have been cool for a soundtrack like maybe something like Wally E when he is falling for Eva...

or you could just sing it to your wife...

damn dude...you making the border north of the US proud on this one...I am a huge fan of the Canada music vibe... must be in the water or something...
 
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Groundy

Well written, well performed, well done.... Alex

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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

Nothing wrong with songs sounding a bit Bowie-ish!..Ever! But this is a really nice romantic love song. Like the guitars a lot. Great vocals.
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I have 2 profiles on this site, (NOW COMBINED INTO ONE PROFILE PAGE)
 One is a musical partnership with Keith Allen, ( we record songs as "The Devil's Toupee").
The 2nd one is for my other musical projects and collaborations. (DarrenG)
Thanks for listening.

guitarron

Terrific song! It has a an epic feel to it. Dramatic lead. Tasty licks. I hope she likes it. Very solid vocals/Production.


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hardlock

What can I saw besides simply outstanding. Hooked with the intro - soothed by the supine vocals - then thrust into the fully blown lead! Great piece! 8)
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Zoltan

Romantic yet cool enough for guys to appreciate also ;) Great playing and singing. The sounds are also impeccable.
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godinqc

Thanks for the feedback .. my wife also liked it  ;D
Have a great day
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Mike_S

Fine work... glad to hear your good woman likes it. But I am not surprised, it's a great piece. Love how you rock out a little in it too, gives it some real passion to go along with that dreamy vibe. Super stuff.

Mike
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