'The Ballad of Elliot Fortune' - Greeny Monday for StoryFest

[godinqc]

Excellent song , the story is captivating .. great playing and vocals also
Great work ..

[chapperz66]

Tremendous song.  Brilliant story telling with a killer ending. 

Or was it.....

[Redler]

Just brilliant, Tim! Great acoustic song and that simple tambourine percussion works fine.

Really fine job with the lyrics, too. This is a fascinating musical short story in 4 minutes! Stunning work!

[BerryPatch]

Excellent track, definitely helped to read along line for line through this (so not to spoil anything ). I love the little twist at the end and the extra details along the way such as the "heart shaped bed" really help set the scene. Straight ahead enough to follow but with a lot of poetic heart injected in. The open Dm was a great idea for this, I love the little dissonances in the chords and the rolling bass really adds a good sense of movement. Great entry for Storyfest

[Greeny]

What a story!
I really want to add a part of Weissenborn guitar (discreet) for my Containment Workshop collaboration collection, do you allow me?

Yep - feel free

[kenny mac]

Excellent story,very clever .
Drags you right in from the start.
Nice one.

[Geir]

You are an excellent storyteller and here you take it to perfection.

The movie plays along in your head as you listen to this.

The music is fab and fits perfectly to the story and drives it forward. Love the open tuning and how it allows for some unusual dissonance

Well done

[Oldrottenhead]

brilliant

[Bluesberry]

Brilliant

[Farrell Jackson]

Good strumming in the open Dm, good vox and and an excellent story Tim! I read along as the story unfolded and about mid-way through I began to wonder if he would find out something that he wouldn't like.....nice work Greeny!