Chaotic World ..Part 1

[godinqc]

I was trying to create a multi part song about a Chaotic world, this is the first part .. not sure if there will be other parts to it.. but here goes for now .. I imported and exported it via Audacity to reduce the size ..

Lyrics:
The moon is red tonight
No planets are in sight
Is this a sign
Of things to come
Is mother land telling us
Or warning us
Beware of the signs


Any feedback is appreciated
Thanks and have a great day ..

[bruno]

Interesting sounds and ideas, I love the mix of old and new.
B

[guitarron]

Very cinematic. Marvel movielike soundtrack. Creates an onimous feeling. I like the synth pad under the acoustic guitar and lead.  My iPad cut out before it reached the end of the track, from what I hear it sounds pretty epic. Will have to have another listen on my studio speakers. Really nice work

[BerryPatch]

Wow, they are all great sections. The first two sections really set the scene and the atmosphere is so awesome throughout. The final section really soars though, so melodic and melancholic and the solo at the end is wonderful. You've got the touch for space rock type tracks.

[StephenM]

totally pro sounding.... this would have been perfect for the Bourne movie series right along with Moby's music...wow..
but this is great as is and could be used on all sorts of things...movies, tv's etc...or just a really cool song..
love the Floydish entry into the vocals

[TPB]

Very cool concept hope you continue the journey could be a epic recording with a mix of everything good synth work Floyd type guitars and cool vocals, Intro was great pulls you right in
Tim

[Greeny]

Big and cinematic then thoughtful and tuneful. Works really well as a two-parter. The soaring solo part is amazing - brings some of the drama of the first section back. Great work!

[godinqc]

Thanks for the feedback ..
I tried to do a Floyd"ish"/Gilmour"ish" guitar solo at the end of the song, but failed miserably 
Maybe I will try again for Part 2 of the song

Have a great day

[chapperz66]

Absolutely not a failure in any way!  Love the movement from bangy,crashy cinematic feel to the more restrained Floyd-esque part.

Please add to it as I would love to see where you take us.

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

This sounds great, like a soundtrack to a science fiction / horror film. ( first part) I like stuff like this, very creative. nice contrast in styles. great music and vocals.

Darren