Sinking by kenny mac

[kenny mac]

Hi guys,
Sat at the keyboard today and this came out

Its basically stripped back to just that,I think adding to it would steal the feeling from the song.
Hope you like it.

Im drifting
Im drifting far away
Im floating
Im floating on the waves
You can stop me sinking
Just  hold out your hand
You can stop me falling

Falling
Im falling far away
Im calling
Calling out your name
Your voice it can save me
Just you say the words
Just hold out your arms
Let me feel your love

Drifting im drifting far away
Im floating
Floating on those waves
Please you can stop me sinking
Just say those words
You know that im sorry
Let me feel your love
Let me feel you love
Again
 

[Nelson]

Outstanding performance.
Your expressive / soulful vocal carrys us along as the music washes over like ocean wave.
Powerful... powerful... vocals

Feels like a Broadway performance .

[StephenM]

great as is...awesome...inspiring...beautiful....well done

[guitarron]

Wow dude. Very soulful. I agree it's good like it is.

[Zoltan]

Cinematic and soulful. The synth sounds makes it feel like ocean waves crashing. The vocals are superb. I agree that there's nothing more needed. It's great as is. Anything more instrumentation wise would just take away from the lonely... almost solitary feel of the track.

[Blooby]

Beautiful voice, keyboard sound, and sentiment. Super well done.

Eeriely Hook-like phrasing in spots. I guess Hook does really bring you back... On that you can rely.

Very cool post.

Blooby

[Ray Brookes]

Those synth strings sound great and along with the vocal present a beautiful song, Kenny.

[Groundy]

Beautiful song Kenny, well written and performed....
Brilliant vox, as always... Alex

[Greeny]

I can hear a bit of Hook in this too. Despite being stripped back, it sounds so big and cinematic. It also reminds me of the blissful ambient music when Ewan McGregor disappears down the toilet in Trainspotting. Beautifully done.

[Hook]

Wow Kenny, what a stellar song. So passionate and powerful with that lush keyboard creati g such a deep atmosphere.  And your vocal is wonderful, don't let those comparisons to me get you down.
Rock on!