It's so near

[Ray Brookes]

Great song, Trev with thoughtful incisive lyrics. I also get the Mercury/Meatloaf vibe that Nelson mentions.

[Lurker]

Wow. Your singing is so emotive. You convey the message as both a lament and a plea.

Yes, I can imagine orchestration building throughout, but I don't think it would be better ... just different. The sparseness, the emptiness, this is a message in itself.

A lone voice crying out. Powerful.

[Mach]

What thought-provoking lyrics and emotive vocal to front your ivories. It is near!

Mach