Lost little girl to DarrenG Unfinished Piano

[thetworegs]

I saw this piano piece from Darren on the board and jumped on it  Thanks Darren hope you like it

I want to dance with the blonde hair girl
Hold hands with the blonde haired girl
Watch her Blonde hair blowing in the breeze
A smile
Capture that frozen memory, for tomorrow
She's lost
so alone
She's lost she's so alone
My heart bleeds for her sorrow
My heart bleeds for her sorrow
Inside 
She's such a lost little girl

We see her but she doesn't notice us
She sits by the window staring out on the big blue bus
the clouds grey the rain does fall

The raindrops hit the floor its a free for all
Its the  dance for the bereft
the clouds break, the sun does smile
Her blue eyes awake
 Tomorrow is another
 Tomorrow is far away
My heart bleeds for her sorrow
My heart bleeds for her sorrow
I love her  from faraway

I want to dance with blonde haired girl
Hold hands with the blonde haired girl
Watch her Blonde hair blow in the breeze
Try Capture her as a  frozen memory,
She's lost she's so alone
She's lost she's so alone
My heart bleeds for her sorrow
My heart bleeds for her sorrow
Inside she's such a lost little girl
Inside she's such a lost little girl
I want to dance with blonde haired girl
But she's such a lost little girl

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

Wow, thanks Trevor those lyrics are fantastic mate. and I love your vocals, the piano was a sombre piece to start with and the lyrics and style you've used give it even more of an uneasy, dark feeling.
I think it sounds great as it is, although I'm tempted to add some strings to it?

[TPB]

Excellent think there should be some dark cello on it great lyrics always love hearing a piece evoke
Tim

[Greeny]

Can definitely hear some orchestration building out the sound. A very poignant song and lyric. I especially love that chord change on the 'tomorrow is another day' part. The chord changes feel quite 1920's to me - very interesting.

[StephenM]

me too...

I predict this one is going to end up with a bit (or alot) more done to it! 

It's nice as is, but could always be different (another version)

[Ferryman_1957]

Very good additions Trev. Poignant lyrics with a performance that really suits the piano piece. Quite haunting, very evocative and a great listen.