Need help with vocal melody...

[Kody]

I really didn't want to ask for help with this, but I found myself in a rut   This is an original I started working on...it's just a rough draft I recorded to get the idea down.  I'd like to hear what any one of you could do with a vocal.  I tried and tried, but can't seem to find the right fit.....Please help me. 

[StevieM]

Hey Kody, that's cool!. Think I might have the words but can't bloody sing. Think Wileys vocals might fit. I could send them to her with this, she what she thinks?
Needs to be longer though --- a lot longer!!
Or I could just stick them on here, see what anyone else can do?
If anyone else has got got something already---- go for it!

[Oldrottenhead]

its on my mbr  no promises tho , busy work wise.

[Oldrottenhead]

ive done a vox /lyric just mastering give me 5 mins then its bed up early for work tomorrow

[Kody]

Awesome!!~ It's only 6:00 PM here!!

[dwardzala]

Kody,

Very cool.  It reminds a little of bit of some group, can't put my finger on it though.  Definitely needs to be longer with maybe another verse and chorus.  Unfortunately I am the farthest thing from a lyricist as there is, so you'll get no words from me.

[Kody]

ORH, that's a good melody you got there, I like it! I know I need to make it longer... You gave me some inspiration there for sure, James~ Good thinking!!

~Thanks~