Puppet Show - (Original V.2)

Started by Saijinn Maas, June 05, 2009, 05:31:24 AM

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June 05, 2009, 05:31:24 AM Last Edit: July 14, 2011, 11:08:36 PM by Saijinn Maas
Saijinn - Puppet Show v2
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Wasn't sure if I should post this as new as opposed to adding it to the end of the other thread.

Changes:

*Wasn't happy with the guitar parts, so I redid them

*Redid vox with less distortion and not so Marilyn Manson-ish

*Did the drum track (Yes! Finally getting the hang of it!)  

*Added and tweaked the lyrics (Because the verses are a bit short, the repeating chorus felt a bit boring to me, so each chorus is changed slightly)

*Added a couple of other audio "tweaks" in there at the beginning and end

Note: After running it thru Audacity, I swear I can hear what sounds like background noise that wasn't there after exporting from the MBR :/


SE

#1
June 05, 2009, 06:05:28 AM
excellent work enjoyed the song with the control freak theme
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Geir

#2
June 05, 2009, 06:14:10 AM
Cleaned up great, making it even better than the 1st post. great production
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Oh well ........

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#3
June 05, 2009, 08:12:25 AM
That was a huge improvement! From my ear's perspective, it opened the song up more as well - Big time cool, man!!

Good job with the drums - Other than tweaking patch settings, the toughest component to the MBR.


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Oldrottenhead

#4
June 05, 2009, 08:34:39 AM
magic
whit goes oan in ma heid



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Satchwood

#5
June 05, 2009, 08:43:26 AM
Cool Sai - nice & heavy! 

I like this version alot better dude - great job! 

Cool lyrics too with the stock market fx!
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Bluesberry

#6
June 05, 2009, 09:34:54 AM
Great song!!!! The vocals sound really good in this version, kinda funky.  This is most excellent.

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June 05, 2009, 09:58:37 AM
Great work !  Loved it, it has a nice heavy feel to it and I like the vox effects on it, sounds extreme!  Good guitar in background and nice bass lines.
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Facemask93

#8
June 05, 2009, 10:21:15 AM
Thats a mighty fine effort , love everything , just wished it had a solo , impressive to say the very least.





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Saijinn Maas

#9
June 05, 2009, 10:56:28 AM
Thanks everyone! I was up until 4:30am messing with this. Recording and re-recording the vox... At one point I even had a guitar layer of just harmonics that matched the chord changes, but I ended up cutting it because it just sounded like too much.

Facemask93

THE SOLO!!!

I was so focused on getting the vox right, that I didn't even think about it. Now I am gonna be thinking about it all day... I guess there's always version 3!!!  ;)
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