Your Parent’s Bed

Started by Ray Brookes, February 09, 2021, 01:32:01 PM

Ray Brookes

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A bit of comedic relief. Who knows what teenagers get up to when their parents go away?

Before anyone asks this story is NOT autobiographical - honestly.


I remember my first day at school
And early friends who would disappear
I remember my first BB gun
I remember my first beer
All these things I will remember
Until the day I'm dead
But most of all I'll remember that day
When you and I made love in your parent's bed.

That weekend your parents went away
For a short summer vacation
Both of us just curious
Full of sexual frustration
I recall you talking dirty
I still remember the things you said
As you and I breathless with guilt
Making love in your parent's bed.

Now I can't help but laugh to myself
To see you worship at the alter of fashion
You weren't so fussy about wearing clothes
On that crazy afternoon of passion
But it's like the sword of Damocles
Hanging there over my head
As I recall someone as a MILF
Instead of you in your parent's bed!
Ray Brookes

Mike_S

Very cool tune Ray... such brilliant little flurries of guitar in there. Beautiful jazzy style. You are a great story teller... fantastic.

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Bluesberry

What a way you have with putting music together....stunning really....fun song lyrically...but the music....the music...so good

Alternate Tunings: CAUTION: your fingers have to be in different places
 
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Ferryman_1957

The lyrics are great fun but it was the arrangement that wowed me. I really liked the separation between the percussion and the vibes/keys/whatever they are, and it's a really unique sound you created here. Some lovely little guitar runs, and the guitar work in the middle from about 1:30 is superb. A rather cheeky twist at the end of the tale as well, a really clever song. Very well done indeed! 

TPB

Great song and lyrics but I am loving the guitar on this song outstanding
Tim
Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

WarpCanada

Yeah, musically I'm feeling a little bit of lyrical style influence from Paul Simon.  Who is one of my favorite songwriters.

  I love confessional lyrics like this. 
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StephenM

so what if it were autobio?  Ha....that's not so bad.... cool song.....and the guitars are fancytastic.... jazz pop....neat o....
 
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         you can call me anything you like.  Just don't call me late for dinner

Pine

Nice tune Ray. Loved the percussion track and the guitar work was cool.

Lyrically a good story...and of course it's not autobiographical  ;)

The keyboard touches were sparkles. Nice....
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Greeny

Outstanding guitar and percussion. Absolutely delicious. I read the lyric first and thought it was going to be a comedy-style song, but it's not. It's serious, seriously-good musicianship and production. Those piano breaks are sublime. In fact the whole thing is sublime. Wow! And I was so busy being amazed by the production and music that the words kind of passed me by on first listen.

Johnny McAleer

Cracking song ray. Great playing and vocals as ever and yes a definite hint of Paul Simon influence which is all to the good of course.  A superbly well-crafted song through and through. Nice one!
"Take music, family and friends: stir gently and serve chilled" - J Mc