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[Theodorekidd]

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[Ferryman_1957]

Really nice work, very catchy song and beautifully produced. You've got a great vocal style that suits the backing really well, and I liked the chord changes over the "I may be bored" section. It's very well mixed and produced, definitely radio-ready - did you do this yourself? If so, tell us a bit about the gear you used and how you did it.

The video's OK but it doesn't add anything to the song for me (sorry). I preferred the lyric version of the video - maybe a combination of the two could work? Maybe some shots of you interspersed with the stock footage would make it more "your" video?

[Ferryman_1957]

Do you have any music videos out or on the way?

I did one back in 1983 but it's only available on VHS tape..... I'm afraid you'll have to ask your parents about that technology......

[Hook]

Cool song, I like your melody in the chorus.
Rock on!

[StephenM]

professional...and the video is interesting... and you sing really good...

[Frank53]

Good song, Theodore. Nice clean recording, and right up front vocal. The simple arrangement is appropriate for the intimate nature of the lyrics.

[Greeny]

Nice song and vid 

[kenny mac]

Nice one,cool song good vibe .
I think the video would work better with inserted clips of yourself rather than all stock footage.
Regarding the sharing thing if you go on to the main page and say look up original songs you will see all the songcrafters stuff thats up and already shared.
You can comment on any if these.

[Hook]

Theodore, we all have songs to share. Under everyone's picture is a link to their jukeboxes, you will have one to, once you have uploaded an mp3. I have over 900 songs in mine, please feel free to listen. Also on the home page is a link/banner to the latest song jukebox. That holds all the tunes posted in the last 10 days. Again please feel fre to listen to everyone's tunes and to comment.
Rock on!

[T.C. Elliott]

I like the laid back groove and you did a grand job on the video.