The moon is not the sun

[maxit]

Sorry for poor recording, that includes paper shredding, someone having a shower, doorbell ringing at the end (the famous climax ...) don't get distracted LoL

The moon is not the sun

The moon is not the sun
A drop is not the sea
A cloud is not the sky
Just like it cannot ever be
Oh please don't come so close to me

Your skin is like a peach
Your lips are cherry red
Your voice is like a song
And I can't feel again that young
Oh please don't come so close to me

...

I'll watch you spread your wings
And go remembering
The times we laughed and talked
But that is how the story goes
Oh when you come so close
to me

[hardlock]

Sweet song! I hear a Beatles influence in the bridge which to me is a good thing. Nice work.

Interesting but the background sounds add an air of realism similar to hearing background music in a film! Doorbell timing was such that it left me feeling she'd returned. 

[Ferryman_1957]

Wonderful piano playing and composition. Really beautiful chord changes and melodies, enhanced by some subtle guitar work. And a very gentle and emotional vocal over the top. A really lovely piece of work, the background sounds didn't intrude at all for me. A very lovely listen.

[Farrell Jackson]

A wonderful song! I like those chords and progression a lot. You sing this well Max. I agree with Ken...I hear a hint of Beatles in the melody. Nice, nice, nice!

Farrell

[chapperz66]

Nice one Max!  Beautiful, gentle and heartfelt singing. 

[tonyc]

superb song maxit , i really like the chord changes , cool stuff . ....cheers tony cee

[Hilary]

So very lovely Max!

[Ella]

Beautiful, sad love-song. Very touching. I like the words and that shower sounds like a rain. It gives a nice feeling to the song.

[Greeny]

Man, some of those chord changes are utterly gorgeous. That's what always gets me, musically. So sublime. Can definitely hear a bit of The Beatles - especially Lennon on the 'oh-oh' part. But the whole thing is so beautiful. I personally love the background ambience. It makes it real... a moment in time.

[Redler]

I heard this in the morning, when Päivi listened to it...I liked this from the first note.

No matter, although there's some "sounds of life". The most important thing is the composition and warm feeling. Just amazing song, Max!