Its not ok with MTC

Started by thetworegs, April 14, 2020, 10:40:55 AM

thetworegs



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Heres a track i finally got done after the promised painting of the bedroom was done the backer is done by Jim MTC from over at Alonetone ive added the vocal and a bit of lead at the end hope you enjoy
It not ok[Music MTC /Lead & Lyrics Reg song]
You said it was not ok to have told you so many lies
You said what I did could never be untied
That I killed all our hopes and dreams when I up and left you dry
But I couldn't tell you what id done when I kissed you goodbye

I was burning alive cause I didn't know what to do
I was a fool I couldn't say
that your doubts were true
I was so confused
I was such a fool
To go
and to loose you too
It's ok to hate me
I feel the same
I love you

The days they burn so slow, filled with guilt I feel blue
this is really how I feel I'm still so in love with you
Give me one more chance and I promise I'll never lie again
I know you've heard it all before but this time I mean what I said

You can't say you'll never forgive me
You can't really mean goodbye
You can't mean I'll never see you again
You can't mean that this over and this is the end
Its not ok
I was wrong
I love you

You said it was not ok to have told you so many lies
But this is really how I feel I'm still so in love with you
Give me one more chance and I promise I'll never lie again
I know you've heard it all before but this time I mean what I say
I love you lady I never want you to leave
i love you oh please forgive me
Can't you forgive me I'm begging down on my knees
Please darling forgive me
Its not ok what I did
what I did was wrong

please forgive what I did was wrong
Please forgive me I'm begging down on my knees
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If Life is a dream then use your imagination

Flash Harry

Cracking rock ballad, the intro is unusual - assuming this is played backwards - I'll have to have a listen, the vocals are great and a lovely lead towards the end - sounds like a bit of Les Paul's gear to me..
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thetworegs

That's some ear you have it's a fender player through a kemper using a les Paul profile ???? thanks for listening
   
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Johnbee

Lots of energy in this song especially in the guitar and vocals.  I love, love, love that guitar but you need to bring it down a bit in the mix.  It overpowers in spots.

 :D John B

Redler

So well written, performed and arranged!
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kenny mac

Excellent rock ballad.
Suites your voice perfectly.
Really well recorded backer.
Nice one reg.
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Ferryman_1957

A really good rocker here, loved your vocals on this one Trev, they fit really well with the backer and the guitar work is great. Very nicely mixed and produced as well. A very effective collaboration, well done to both of you.

Greeny

Excellent song - your vocals really shine. And the guitar work is very tasty indeed.

AndyR

I only figured out the other day - over on alonetone - that this was a complete song over MTC's post.

Because I'd downloaded it too and tried a few lead guitar noodles and given up (I did Me Too instead), I'd thought "It's not ok with MTC" was just going to be a guitar solo... So it was on my "I'll listen later" list for too long.

When I finally listened to this the other day I was STUNNED how good this song is. And we get a cool solo at the end too.
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