Court Jester's Waltz

Started by Johnbee, March 28, 2020, 09:33:50 AM

Johnbee

Court Jester's Waltz192
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Wrote this about a year ago.  Lyrics are fiction about a person who feels used and at the disposal of somebody important in their life and trying to understand why.  In 6/8 so that's where the waltz comes in.

Enjoy.
Lyrics
I can subscribe to your latest mystery
What you reveal to me just captivates my mind
But you're nothing more than an old unlocked door
and I must walk through you to get through the haze

Don't you realize you're making a joke of me
A jester not proud to be is what I've just become
But I'll make you laugh if only to grasp
the cruelty in your eyes carried away

(Chorus)
I'll put my costume on
and make you laugh so long
I'm just a fool and you've got what you want from me
Don't have a sense of pride
I've put it all aside
Hope you enjoy the show
that I've put on for you

You haven't a clue how deep my feelings go. How I weep.
I tell all these stupid jokes
to hide such a tragic hoax
I want to be serious for just one moment
Look at my face close up
You'll see traces of a frown

(Chorus)
I'll put my costume on
and make you laugh so long
I'm just a fool and you've got what you want from me
Don't have a sense of pride
I've put it all aside
Hope you enjoy the show
that I've put on for you


c 2019 John Bowen Music

:) John B

Farrell Jackson

Very nicely done John! Your lyric are excellently written. A great performance on the vocal and the piano is cool. Well done!

Farrell
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Farrell Jackson


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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

Greeny

Beautiful songwriting. Complex, sophisticated, and those chord changes are delicious. Love that extended middle section - so good!

Johnbee

Hey Farrell & Greeny-Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and your kind words.

 :) John B

As classy as I remember, superb song writing with excellent lyrical content. Willie
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Oldrottenhead

Lovely song, getting an early Todd Rundgren vibe on those piano chords and progression. Braw tell yer maw!
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Oldrottenhead
"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of."
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Redler

I like the atmosphere of this. Everything's put well together and so well produced. Saxophone is icing on the cake!

Excellent job, John!
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Geir

Oh my ...  this is beautiful !!

Excellent songwriting and a stellar performance !
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Oh well ........

Johnbee

Hello Willie, ORH, Redler & Gier.
Thanks so much, guys!
 :) JB

drumbum

Very nice tune..easy to get lost in.. Intellectual. Great work..!
If you swim against the tide long enough, it turns and becomes momentum.........