Death and Rebirth_In the Key of Nice and Slow

Started by Diego Ayala, February 11, 2020, 04:36:29 AM

Diego Ayala

Death and Rebirth In the Key of Nice and Slow
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I asked my niece Rachel to write me a poem/lyrics based on thoughts she shared after her Mom passed away  a few years ago ~~~  Had saved it, and while going thru my saved music files, found it, and thought it fit well with a blues in the key of nice and slow....  This lil blues was one I shared with the group 2009 or 2010.

It is what it is, eh?  Abrazos

Poem by: Rachel Ayala Z.
Narration and music by: Rachel's favorite uncle #__  Diego ~~~ DAyala Musica

First thing this morning, I saw a picture of you
Arms wrapped around me, while the May wind blew
And I realized loss can be like breathing:
A bit of the earth the body is constantly capturing

When I exhale, I give thanks
Thanks, without effort or restraint
A song, and a prayer that aches, without apology
And I find balance in the death and rebirth of things unseen.

While I cling to the thoughts, from a time faraway,
I feel the absence of the peace in your face
A calm inhalation, that slowly moves down,
Expanding, unfurling, and quickly transforms
The breath that fulfills, releases, sustains

When I exhale, I give thanks
Thanks without effort or restraint
A song, and a prayer that aches, without apology
And I find balance in the death and rebirth of things unseen.

I wanted, I wanted what i'd lost and forgot
I wanted, I needed that small piece of god

When I exhale, I give thanks
Thanks without effort or restraint
A song, and a prayer that aches, without apology
And I find balance in the death and rebirth of things unseen.

I think I miss you the most when its hardest to breath
the time of the night, when the dark lets me grieve,
when each star I can see, makes it painful to think,
so the air in my chest comes undone, set free
Whether I'm asleep and I dream it, or awake--

When I exhale, I give thanks
Thanks without effort or restraint
A song, and a prayer that aches, without apology
And I find balance in the death and rebirth of things unseen.

Hook

On my 3rd listen, captivating. Very William Boroughsy.
Rock on!

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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

Diego Ayala

Quote from: Hook on February 11, 2020, 06:47:28 AMOn my 3rd listen, captivating. Very William Boroughsy.
Rock on!

3rd listen ~~~ wow ~ "very William S. Burroughsy" ~ hahaaa, yeah ~~~ wondering now if can do some short pieces, like mini-podcasts with music in background....

Ferryman_1957

Very clever combination of spoken word and music. I like the way you did the recording of the vocal part as well. Very atmospheric, which suits the lyrics so well. Interesting and intriguing, a very good listen.

Flash Harry

I too like the combination of music and the spoken word.

I like the noise, the limited bandwidth and distortion on the vocal, it adds a timeless aspect to it.

Poignant and mindful. Thank you.
We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different
- Kurt Vonnegut.

kenny mac

Wow powerful stuff.
What great words and the combination of your great playing and spoken delivery,it all adds to the feeling and vibe.
Well done to all.
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Diego Ayala

Quote from: Flash Harry on February 13, 2020, 02:52:20 PMI too like the combination of music and the spoken word.

I like the noise, the limited bandwidth and distortion on the vocal, it adds a timeless aspect to it.

Poignant and mindful. Thank you.

Well, ended up in my balcony with glass of Monkey Shoulder Whisky. my Forrest Gump android phone, and cars going by ~ just video tape function ~ converted to mp3 and added it as a tract with good old Audacity.

Abrazos

Redler

Nice groove on the backer! Spoken words works nicely.
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