These Ghosts

Started by Mike_S, August 06, 2019, 10:12:42 AM

Ella

Fits great to ghosts stories. Scary!

Romidon

Quote from: Mike_S on August 19, 2019, 06:08:57 AM
Quote from: Romidon on August 18, 2019, 12:00:45 PM"Is there something deep inside you
Something that you'd like to forget.
Does it really ____________ you?
Has it got the better of you yet?"

I love the line '...Has it got the better of you yet?', but I think it would be even more impactive if I fully understood the line before it.. 

...Romidon... just on that one line you couldn't make out... that is...

"Does it rear it's ugly head on you"!

Thank you for listening in to those lyrics!...

Thank you for the fill-in, Mike.  (I KNEW I heard the word 'ugly' in there, but as I misheard 'rear it's' for 'really' and couldn't make out the other words, I couldn't make sense of it.  Now I can! In fact the whole phrase works much better, now.  :)
 
As a songwriter, the lyrics are the one thing I really pay attention to in songs.  And I really liked the lyrics to this song.  As I already stated:
Quote from: romidonThat the experiences of just living life are going to leave little ghosts that could have lingering effects on our lives, is a haunting ( :) ) thought.

The beauty of writing a song like this is it actually doesn't fit neatly into a box and is open to different interpretations; that's just mine.
(But I hope it comes somewhat close to what you were thinking..  :) )

romidon.

Hilary

I loved it Mike, the song sounds great, you sound great.

Mellow but eery!
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cuthbert

Getting to this late - I love the flanged arpeggios, and how your vocal kicks in with reverb when the drums come in.

Spooky & trippy!
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