Wrecked (words and music by kenny mac)

Started by kenny mac, July 26, 2019, 04:08:47 PM

kenny mac

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I'm undeniably
Trapped and lost on the rocks
like a shipwreck
And I just dont know
when I will break
no I just dont know
When I will float slowly away.


Continuety .
was lost in words
And we both started drifting
And I just dont know
How this will end
No I just dont know
If there's a way out.

Wish I could fly away
Up to the sun
Melt off these wings of pain
That form a chain on my heart
Wish I could fly away.
Up to the sun
And make it go away
The hurt and pain.
In my heart


Time it ticks away
Love dissolves
and  all that is left there
Is a memory
Of all that we had
And it haunts me now
The good and the bad.



Wish I could fly away
Up to the sun
Melt off these wings of pain
That form a chain around¹ heart
Wish I could fly away.
Up to the sun
And make it go away
The hurt and pain.

Hi guys,
this is a new one I came up with while sitting at the piano, then it just built up.
Hope you like it.
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Flash Harry

I love the vulnerability of the vocal, it's typically your style. The openness of the arrangement leaves plenty of room for it.

Not a cheerful song, melancholy and introspective. It works really well. 
We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different
- Kurt Vonnegut.

Hook

Holy shit brother, your are inside my head. Im kinda in a grieving process and this is just really there for me.
Rock on!

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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

thetworegs

Agree with Flash, beautifully vunerable
   
If Life is a dream then use your imagination

Farrell Jackson

Well written and executed Kenny! The start with just piano and your voice sets the stage and then the full instrumentation enters to take it over the top...nicely done!

Farrell
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Farrell Jackson


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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

TPB

Back for another listen and I see I did not comment the first time I listened sorry thought  I did I guess  I am lucky to remember my name these days .  I love the itro man and the the keys it was a great setup for the song well done Bravo
Tim
Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

Redler

Nice piano ballad! The guitar puts a fine flavor to this. Well written and performed as always!!
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Hook


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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

Mike_S

Quote from: thetworegs on July 29, 2019, 09:43:24 AMAgree with Flash, beautifully vunerable

Got to agree with this... you are really putting it out there which is brave and makes for a really great and engaging listen

Mike
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Ferryman_1957

Very nice work Kenny. Can only agree with comments about the openness of the arrangement and the great feel to the vocals. I really liked the subtle guitar work which has a really nice sound and gradually builds through the track.