'Gordon' by Sphagnum Core

[Sphagnum Core]

My first song post. I hope it works.

I did this one with my phone on the train on the way to work. I put a whole albums worth of these up on bandcamp. Each song is named after the stations my train stops at. 'Gordon' is actually the station I get on at. I haven't done vocals for them yet because that would be way too annoying for other passengers at peak hour. I'll have to make a late night train trip and find a deserted carriage for that.

What? Me a trainspotter you say? No way!

[Hilary]

I find you've found a niche here. I'd love to hear some vocals done on a train that would be amazing.

You should put some videos up on Youtube of youcomposing these songs on the trains, I think they'd be popular. Also get some press out there and radio interest to plug the albumn. You could also link it to trainspotter fans on Instagram and Twitter. These are serious suggestions.

and welcome 

[alfstone]

I agree with Hilary, the song structure is quite interesting, and some vocals would make the tune more interesting. Don't forget that one of the main feature here in Songcrafters is collaboration, so if you want I'm sure you will find here someone to sing over it...

Alfredo

[Hilary]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ij8BpOa-Pg

[Hook]

I like it a lot and it meets our current festival requirements of being under 60 seconds. I often record in my car buy haven't a train...yet. Great 1st post.
Rock on!

[Rata-tat-tat]

I dig it... a little on the short side... but kewl as hell... rockin!

[Redler]

Amazing job  - and in the train! Nice instrumental song.

Welcome on board!