"Every Touch"a Hook original from the Orlando Sessions

[Hook]

So my wife wanted me to take some time and get away by myself. I have a small little condo in Orlando for Today & tomorrow and I brought some gear. Gonna see how many tunes I can write. Drums on this are from garageband.
1 rhythm Guitar (stereo)
1 drums (stereo)
1 U bass
1 vocal (stereo)
1 guitar solo

Every Touch

written & performed by Hook

Harsh words over simple things
Expectations so high
Harsh words over silly goals
That only speak you not i

Tender moments not so much
Dissapointment in every touch

I'm not the what you wanted no
I'm not the who or how
The where you set your sights
Is no where near where I am now
And a moments hesitation
Is all that's needed for a fall
And I've fallen pretty low

Stares from everyone
Everyone that can hear
Stares from everyone
Judgment is quite clear

[Groundy]

Another hit for me Hook,
I hope you are enjoying your time away as much as I am enjoying your music.
Magic.

Alex.

[Redler]

Another winner with cool guitar tones! Have a nice time in Orlando - I'll stay tuned!

[ODH]

That minor chord a the end really punched me in the midriff, great ending.

Those words are a little unsettling. They put me in mind of Love Will Tear Us Apart.

[Mike_S]

yes hope you are having a good time there... what a great idea to just bash out one tune after another over a weekend. great to hear you on guitar. this is a heavy listen... really powerful, dark song with those super lyrics. well done hook.

mike

[thetworegs]

hope you work it out over the weekend or rather sing it out .... great to hear you with a guitar again work on!!

[Mach]

This is different, which I like, with a dark vibe. I like the bridge part before that cool lead kicks in. Yeah that ending minor chord is great!

Mach

[kenny mac]

Excellent rocking vibe there,strangely took in a different direction by a smooth laid back vocal.
Cool song.

[Ferryman_1957]

Great song and clever chord progressions. Loving the guitar sounds and riffs here, very jagged and raw.  But looking at the lyrics, maybe that's what you were trying to get across....  Hope the time at the condo works out for you.

I'll be checking some more from these sessions over the next couple of days. Looks like you have been quite productive.

[Groundy]

Back for another listen...

Alex.