Nobody heard nobody saw

Started by thetworegs, February 28, 2018, 01:19:59 PM

thetworegs

Heres a song from my RPM challenge album for this year. it was quite rushed as this was the last track i did today they are all recorded in Febuary a couple of collabs one with Rat-atat-tat Thanks Tod i put in and another with the band Big Bad Dog to fill up the tracks as i needed 10 to complete. Anyway if you feel like a listen heres the link https://alonetone.com/thetworegs/playlists/tomorrow-rpm-2018. I tried playing all instruments on this one but recorded the drums in a few parts as i'm not much of a drummer yet!! or guitarist or bass player come to that but i do try
Jonny sat with Mary in a big black car
watching the glamorous movie stars
All the others sat separately
They couldn't hear Mary's pleas
They couldn't hear
They couldn't hear
They couldn't hear
They couldn't hear
They couldn't hear
They couldn't hear


There was a moment when the monster came
And everyone jumped back
Wow!
everyone screamed out loud and nobody heard Mary shout back
No body heard
No body heard
No body heard
No body heard
No body heard
No body heard
Johnny slapped her hard across the face
She hit her head real hard
Blood stained the leather seats
No body heard her pain at all 
No body heard
No body heard
No body heard
No body heard
No body heard
No body heard

Break

Johnny slammed the car into gear and drove off real fast
Didn't stop to look around
He had no time to waste at all
Mary laid silent slumped against the car door
 as he swung a hard right
out into the dark night nobody saw
Nobody saw
Nobody saw
Nobody saw

Break

Nobody saw
Nobody saw
Nobody saw
No body saw
No body saw
Mary fall to the floor

Jonny drove out  into the night
it was as dark as soot
All the others saw were    the tail lights as they disappeared over the hill
Out into the desert
johnny drove
Then came upon a place  where nobody goes
Nobody saw
Nobody saw
Nobody saw
Nobody saw
Nobody saw


Nobody heard nobody saw
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If Life is a dream then use your imagination

Redler

Brilliant!! This could be a lost Elvis track!

Bravo Trev!
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kenny mac

wow Trev,killer.
 in fact could be a killers song.
vibrant ,energetic and smooth.
Nice one mate.
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Mach

Cool freekin' song Trev. Yeah I agree with Kenny it's very energetic and original too.
You paint the perfect picture of the story with a great hook.

Mach
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Farrell Jackson

A great song Trevor with a horror story unfolding in the lyric. Well done!

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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

Kenneth

Yea!
Your guitar playing reminds me of McCartney on "Ram".
Cool song Trevor!
"...a guitar sound that you could curdle cream with." Ferryman

bruno

A fab collaboration between two great songcrafters. Love the approach, quite Jim Steinman imo.
Brill.
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