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Nobody knew

Started by thetworegs, February 07, 2018, 01:57:52 PM

thetworegs

I heard some really sad news on the TV that an 11 year old girl had been suspected of committing suicide on the way home from school.....what is the world coming too........
She disappeared from the bridge
Nobody saw her fall

She disappeared from the bridge
Nobody saw her fall

A lonely walk home from the school
Nobody saw her walk on by

Her head was down, she was feeling low
She was feeling despondent
Nobody knew

She's the one walked onto the bridge
She's the one who disappeared from the bridge
And fell
And fell and fell

Suicidal thought s mingled with the darkness in her mind
She realised it was time to stop doing time
Life had got crazy although the dream had just begun
But she felt surrounded she was on the run

She's the one walked onto the bridge
She's the one who disappeared from the bridge
And fell
And fell

Her mother mourns her every day, every hour
She never thought of that as she threw herself aside
Everything was crazy the sky was blue 
The water was cold as she broke on through 
While she floated in air she regretted it all
She for one was not going to the ball

She's the one walked onto the bridge
She's the one who disappeared from the bridge
And fell
And fell and fell

Break
She disappeared from the bridge
Nobody saw her fall

She disappeared from the bridge
Nobody saw her fall
Her mother mourns
Her mother mourns
Nobody Knew
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Groundy

So sad Trev,
As you say what is the world coming too,
Well written and performed.


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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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Nice work Trev although the subject is very sad. Willie
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Redler

So sad news...but you have written impressive song about it. Fine job, Trev!
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SE

Sad news and so young and so much life left. Excellent job on the tune great rock vox, well played!!
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pjd1

Sad indeed you are a strong lad to be able to wright something about the issue all credit to you and your talents


Well Done

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Mach

Yes such a sad story. It must be tough to write and perform something about a tragedy of this nature. Well done Trev.

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