Inhuman touch take 2 better

[finaltear]

this is a better vershion of an earler song i posted on hear, i included a piano and some fake bass, not shure what style or genre this is, any ideas ?.
let us know what u think anyhow.

[StevieM]

Genre? Sort of Celtic/Folk/something else fusion maybe?
But then again------Who cares anyway??? I really like this. 'Nother download coming up. Got to hear this again.

[Satchwood]

I hear a little Jim Morrison and the Doors (at times) on this one FT.  Maybe a touch of medieval genre.  Definitely original!

You've got that erie haunting voice - nice singing and cool guitar work - I like how you come in with the lead guitar towards the end - and then end with piano - how flippin cool!

[launched]

Didn't catch the first post, but I like this one - nice vox and clean playing. You sound a little like Travis Meeks.

Nice Post,

Mark

[Wiley]

This version is much nicer than the first. Great job!  Kind of haunting I like it a lot.

[finaltear]

i didn't want to be to bold with the piano, cuz im very out of practice, kept it quiet, i think its ok, your right guys i think u all said it, HAUNTING,
thanks for the good feed back, i gonna be uploading somthing a bit more rocky next, this was only an experiment of sound,
cheers.

[Ferryman_1957]

This is really strong, lots of layers and it really builds in power. You definitely got haunting all right. Your vox are great, very well suited to this. I like the guitar early on as well, great little sequence there. Could you post the lyrics?

My only comment would be the mix seems a bit narrow in the stereo image - you could put some of the haunting guitar early on way left or right to create a bit more space. But that's a minor point.

Cheers,

Nigel

[finaltear]

Feel my inhuman touch, feel the rush, become hypnotized, try to escape my clutch
You will be mine, for all of time; I can see your soul, burning through your eyes
My power over you, I'm the puppet master, you'll do what I want you to do
And ill make you dance to my tune, then we'll be together soon
Feel my inhuman touch!

I pull the strings of your fate, to the tune of my hate, and your spirit I break
My body an empty shell, But you're under my spell, and no-one you can tell
Caught in this web of deceit, this hell rides got you on the edge of your seat
You think im going to save you, girl I f***ing made you, Suddenly your heart just skips a beat

you got nowhere to run, no where to hide
When I sed you could trust me, guess what I lied
And now's the time, to stand in line
Receive your sentence and do your time

-------there the best lyrics from it,

i realised i shuold of mixed the guitar stero but i bounced them onto one track so i was stuck with it!, dam.
i think this would sound good with female vox, some one like amy lee from evenanesance? just my thoughts*

[Glenn Mitchell]

Remember you can get simulated stereo by copying a track and changing the FX on one of them (or at least different FX on each one), then panning hard left and right with the two.

Loved the song.

[Greeny]

Kinda folky-celtic-country to my ears. Sod the genre though, it's a great song. I can hear a touch of Jim Morrison in the vocal delivery too. I like the way it builds in sound and power, and there's some excellent guitar work going on. It's a very, very good listen, that's for sure!