"Moonglow" original song

[Davidtheguy]

My second song on here, Moonglow, in this song I met a girl on Saturday night with whom there was a definite connection, but I didn't take her number and will probably never see her again.

[launched]

Proper songwriting David, I really dig this one! The rhythm/drum arrangement very catchy and smooth as silk, as well as the singing and vocal harmonies. It's my bag.

Mark

[kenny mac]

I like the way the harmony comes in a step behind the main vocal.
I think the vocal could be down further in the mix though,there's a lot of instrumentation hoping on there that's being hidden by the vocal being so high in volume.
Cool story.

[Groundy]

Nice one David, love the harmony,
Do I detect a slight Scouse accent here?
well done.

Alex

[Redler]

Well written and sung! Enjoyable listening!

[Rolow]

David the songwriter guy,  the story is so well written, and cleverly fitted into music.  I have to agree there is a bit of disconnect between the vocal and the instruments.  imo, you might try some reverb, possibly other effects.  But the vocal is good, and we do want to hear it.

Keep it up Guy, you've got talent here.  This was well done, a good listen.  Thanks for posting.


Ron