Leigh - "Demons of America"

[leighelse]

Your vocal is very clean and precise, technical even. I think the song would benefit from a dirtier vocal (I mean the delivery).

Thanks Hilary. I agree that a dirtier vocal would be better, but I struggle just to get the notes, and I think much more is beyond me. If someone else is interested I'm very happy to post the backing without the vocal ... yes? Please?

[Hilary]

Your vocal is very clean and precise, technical even. I think the song would benefit from a dirtier vocal (I mean the delivery).

Thanks Hilary. I agree that a dirtier vocal would be better, but I struggle just to get the notes, and I think much more is beyond me. If someone else is interested I'm very happy to post the backing without the vocal ... yes? Please?

I think you are overthinking it when you are singing it. It just needs to have more bounce in the phrasing and sing it like you'd speak it.

[Hilary]

It reminds me of 10cc's Dreadlock Holiday - have a listen to their phrasing.

I love the a-ahs on America btw.

[Jarle]

This is brilliant, fabulous production and performance. Love it.

[Mike_S]

Really enjoyed it... has a certain quirkyness that I really like. Reminds me a little of The Police and maybe even Prefab Sprout on the intro but you have your own unique sound which is commendable.

Mike

[kenny mac]

This is a really great track,and your instrumentation on it is fabulous.
I like the lyrics as well,very interesting.
The percussion does a great job in creating those twists and turns in the dings direction and the recording is spot on.
I always hear a flavor of Nico from the velvet underground in your vocal.
It has a unique tone.
Nice one.

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

I can only imagine the amount of work involved in producing this gem, I'm a day and a half man beginning to end and that's when I'm dawdling. Great subject matter which deserved the time spent. I love it.    Willie