Its gone wrong

[thetworegs]

a track for a musical .....piano and vocal...no idea where this one came from.... Linked three software instruments together and played live Bassoon, Tuned Timpani, and acoustic piano...then i added the vocal.....Hope you enjoy...Thanks for listening

Counting on my fingers,  counting on my toes,  the years go by, but life is so slow
where life leads, to where it goes ,where it's heading, no one really knows 
But a small mistake a wrong place a wrong time suddenly your life is at stake

suddenly its gone

suddenly it all goes wrong


another day ,just drifting away,
you've got a carefree mind everything is at play,
everything you need you have on this day
then suddenly it goes wrong
suddenly it's all gone

you shouldn't have turned that way
you shouldn't have said those things in that way
you should have tried to turn away
then it would have turned out, to a different kind of day


then maybe you could have got away
then maybe you could have got away


But life isn't like that
you did wrong that day
you should of turned your back
you should have left
you should have just turned away

but now life is full of yesterdays regret
it's what if, what if i'd just turned away

judgement day has come
the sentence has been passed
now life's gone

Break 76

Another day,Another year passes by with no one dear
all alone with the white room dancing to the jailers tune
Dance away
Dance away
Dance away the memories from the mind
Another day, another year ,has gone
another year dancing to the dead mans psalm

if only i had walked away
if only i had not gone that day
if only i had not loved her with all my being
if only i had learned to let go

if i
if i had let her go that day
if only i'd let her run away
if only i had stopped and thought
that her love, was gone
that her love, was gone
that her love, was gone

But no, i could do it that way

my pride, made me stand, made me pick that fight
i provoked him, i pushed him
i stabbed him i wanted him to die
i had fury running through my bones, running right through me down to my toes
It wasn't till i saw him laying in his blood cold
that i had done so wrong
now he's gone
now my lifes  its gone
now his lifes  its gone
i did wrong
i did wrong

It's Gone Wrong

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[Johnny Robbo]

Just finished watching those videos of you with your band & then I'm straight into this. It really strikes me just what a range of styles you have at your disposal, mate. Excellent, complex & dark songs like this, then you go and blow the roof off with your "rock" voice. You are a talented bloke, Trev! Bravo!

[Mike_S]

Great performance... big big vocal. Yes this one is made for a big stage musical production. Super songwriting skills... for writing in this style I doff my hat. Well done sir.

[leighelse]

Boy, can you sing - what a talent!

I like the accents (tuned timpani?) in "You shouldn't have turned that way". It's a very dramatic song, and the accompaniment is well suited, especially that big-as piano.

Nice climactic ending too.

[Redler]

Very impressive song! Just professional song writing and performance! Piano and voice is perfectly in balance!

[Kenneth]

From Freddie Mercury to Meatloaf, Elvis to Brian Johnson, Bon to Reg, you do it all Trev! Great work!

[launched]

"It could have been a different kind of day" - Love that!! The lyrics and singing are very moving. Like always Trev, incredible songcrafting!

Peace,

Mark

[Kenneth]

Back for more!

[Groundy]

Brilliant Trev Brilliant..
One of your best to date..
well done....

Alex

[fenderbender]

Brilliant Trev.
You have talent man--
Top class singer /songwriter and more to spare
from ballads to rock and musicals -no problem
Congrats
Can I have some of that talent you don't use


Tommy