'Private Planet' - a Greeny Monday Original

[Greeny]

Features Fender MiM strat, Takamine acoustic, Fender precision bass (played with a pick), vocals and Garageband drums. All recorded on the MBR, with a little bit of swirl and one small sound effect added in Audacity.

A bit pyschedelic-y.

Lyric:

slow motion bubbles popping in the sun
like soapy bombs that fall on everyone
tick-tock goes the clock inside the croc
as i turn the rasperry jelly lock (round and round and round)

I try to talk and act like an earthling, but i belong
on another planet with you
I try to talk and act like an earthling, but i belong
on a private planet with you

like a sad and silent clown
i'm all out of mime
let me lay in your arms
my partner in crime

on a bed of nails and broken stars
i nurse a bout of european noir
painting pictures in my heads with words
where you and I can fly like birds (round and round and round)

I try to talk and act like an earthling, but i belong
on another planet with you
I try to talk and act like an earthling, but i belong
on a private planet with you

like a sad and silent clown
i'm all out of mime
let me lay in your arms
my partner in crime

[Redler]

You've put acoustic and electric guitars together extremely well! Sweet composition and lyric/vox! Pure Greeny brilliance!

Garage Band drums sounds very good and I liked the bass line a lot!!

Well done!

[Groundy]

Listening with Cans,
Brilliant just Brilliant Tim.....
Take a bow.......

Alex

[Oldrottenhead]

like someone else said on another song, doesnt work on normal player and seems at 13.59 a tad long. however i downloaded it to my piepod.

i'm in xtcy

[bruno]

Listened to earlier. Like a bus, nothing then 3 (no pressure) come along in quick succession  Loving these Greeny Mondays, another corker. More please :-)
B 

[Farrell Jackson]

A great Greeny Monday song listen even if it is on Tuesday! I love hearing the unique bass line that you always come up with...superp harmony blend with the guitar chords! Good lyric and vocals.....that paint cool psychedelic pictures.

Farrell

[Geir]

Yep Greeny Mondays or Greeny Anydays are always a treat. No exception here!

I really love your bass playing Tim ! And your lyric universe seem to have no bounds !!

Yes, more please

[TPB]

Spacey but well put together and played seeing this is my Monday fit right in Nice job
Tim

[Mike_S]

Really well crafted Tim... lovely song you have here. Slightly beatles-esque, maybe even shades of Bowie, but a great original track. Very well mixed, everything has space to breathe.

Mike

[kenny mac]

Another belter Greeny,I love the vibe on this.
Well done mate.