Cracking up(moving on) armeenis and kenny mac (now with alternative mix)

[kenny mac]

Hi dudes,
This song was originally posted by  armeenis who invited people to have a go at doing something with it so heres my take.
The music as I said to  armeenis was pretty complex in its structure but once I dived into it ,it seemed to open up like a big puzzle.
Hope you like it,its a bit dark in the storyline but the atmospherics of the music took me there.
Lyrics to follow
kenny

[kenny mac]

          Cracking up(Moving on)

You mutter as you move on through the rain
Your umbrellas lying in the hall
You messed it up again
Such a shame
And you can't understand what's going on
And you are wondering just what is wrong
You fumble in your pockets all you feel
There in your hands are soaking cigarettes
You were going to give up now you've got
No choice,all that goes through your head
Is the traffic noise
The man in the pinstriped suit he sneers and says
you've got no life,you've got no experience
Your cracking up
No experience that's what he said to me
He had no regrets of what he did to me
What he said to me
No regrets
no life?
The voice inside your head
 replays the last
Words that she said
You've got no confidence
It rattles in your brain driving
You insane,your cracking up

[Hook]

Very cool Kenny, I love the Beatles harmonies that your approaching the song with it really gives it an entirely different dimension. Quite an enjoyable listen well Gents.
 Rock on!

[Redler]

Liked the instrumental version earlier, but with Kenny's lyric and vocals this became even better! The harmonies are awesome! The vocal arrangement is fantastic. And yes, a bit Beatles style on the harmonies!

Excellent collab!

[armeenis]

I love it! Creates extra moods and feelings. Very cool!

[heg577]

Agree with the Beatles comparisons - I hear a bit of "Walrus" in there - a fine song nonetheless. Great performance. Lots of mood and integrity.
 Great post.

[SE]

Well done really excellent collab, lots of variation twists and turns, what an enjoyable listen!!

[Mike_S]

I think what you have done here Kenny is superb. I don't know how you could visualise it, but you did it. A brave move to try and put vocals to this, but by heck the whole thing just sounds feckin' amazing!!

Rock on guys!

Mike

[armeenis]

I hear a bit of Beatles and Pink Floyd in the vocals... Awesome!

Send me those tracks!

[kenny mac]

Here is an alternative mix with no backing vocals