Now I'm Lost Too

Started by The Gobi Desert Canoe Club, February 29, 2016, 06:01:22 AM

Now I'm Lost Too
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Hi all, bit of a sad song which is quite surprising as the sun's out and I normally feel more upbeat when the weather's better. Anyway a minimal piece, two guitar tracks, two synth tracks and a stereo vocal track. I used the Fender Tim Armstrong acoustic which I'm getting to grips with now, hope you enjoy.     Willie

I was searching
For something that had no name
I'd had it once
And let it go again
And I was hoping
That it was safe with you
But you lost it
Now I'm lost too

And like the pictures
From our wedding day
They're turning brown
As they fade away
And here am I
Not knowing what to do
"Cos you lost it
Now I'm lost too

Like the flowers in your wedding bouquet
I fall apart in the cold light of day

I'm colder now
Nobody to keep me warm
So much older now
I feel broken and worn
And I was hoping
I'd be safe with you
But you lost it
Now I'm lost too
But you lost it
Now I'm lost too




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fenderbender

Great song Willie
great vocals as always 8) 8) 8) 8)
that is some acoustic sound  8) 8) 8) 8)


I'm getting a little drop down in volume around 1.10.(may be just me tho' ::) ::))


Tommy
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Redler

Agree with Tommy! Excellent songwriting on this ballad!

Beautiful vocal melodies...
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Groundy

Great songwriting great vocals Willie..
Well done....Alex

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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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Mike_S

Great song Willie. Love the sound you got and the choice to leave it without drums was a great idea. Really loved it.

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kenny mac

An excellent song there.
A very heartfelt emotional song that realy draws you in to the story.
Great recording,great songwriting.
I always make the mistake of thinking some songs are auto biographic but this is a compliment as I believe what the singer is telling me ,it sometimes gets misconstrued by the person but as I said it is always a nod to the songwriter because I get lost in the story and believe them.
A great emotional story,thanks for letting us in.
Well done
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Blooby

Quote from: Redler on February 29, 2016, 07:15:31 AMBeautiful vocal melodies...

Agreed.

This tune has a forlorn Springsteen quality to it.  I would normally never point this out, but the voice warble at 1:15 or so adds a lot of character. I rewound several times.

I'd also point out that were I to mix this track, I would have had the keys too loud. There are so gorgeously supportive in this tune. Well done.

Blooby