"Without You" - AlachuaMet 2015 - Lurker, Hook & Blooby (remix)

[Blooby]

Remix is half a dozen or so posts down.

This was the only tune that ended up to a click...this to facilitate my diabolical machinations. John had the lyrics, Hook put down the Tele power chords, and I muddled about in the shadows after everybody left.

My ears are tired. I'm not sure if the mix will hold up, but I have to go to sleep.

Blooby


Without You

Would it reduce your misery
If I said I was sorry
For things that I never did do
Would you ever forgive me
For the sins you imagined
That I had committed against you

You took as an affront
Or a slight
All the things I did
To improve my life
Without you

When we were much younger
We both committed blunders
But that was when we were just kids
Should I pay my whole life
For the mistakes of a child
Why can't you just let it go like I did

You took as an affront
Or a slight
All the things I did
To improve my life
Without you

You always made it hard
For anyone to love you
We'd get close then you'd thrust me away
You're quick to criticize
Then if I would answer
You would cut off whatever I'd say

You took as an affront
Or a slight
All the things I did
To improve my life
Without you

[Redler]

Nice powerpop song with excellent tones, gents!

[Groundy]

A fantastic number gents,
So well written and performed....

Alex

[bruno]

Almost missed this - super power pop tune. Mix sounds fine to me, vocals sound well balanced, guitars sound very nice. Excellent tune - sounds like a great time was had by all, I'm sure that this will be the first of many :-)
B

[Hook]

Fabulously done did my brother! I dig that bass line, i have it going through the car and I might raise the bass a bit, Wicked solo. And you just had to resolve...had me laughing.
Rock on!

[Blooby]

And you just had to resolve...had me laughing.

C'mon now. I thought the pause was a happy compromise. I figured you would snicker.

[Kenny B]

Excellent song ... Great job on this.

kb

[Hilary]

Oh a fine song gents - who wrote the lyrics?

I'd have left it without the resolve

[Blooby]

I thought I'd take another stab at the mix. I have been trying to find my way with limiting. I went extra scrunchy as it was a bit poppy.

who wrote the lyrics?

That would be John (Lurker). He is damaged goods as you can see.

I'd have left it without the resolve

I am apparently a conformist.


Blooby

[T.C. Elliott]

I like the mix. The guitars were great, that lead tone and the playing. The vocals good and I think the lyric did a great job of relaying the story. Pretty damn good job all y'all. At least I enjoyed it.