Dont Surrender

[marcus_gloom]

A new song I wrote

It took quite a while to find time to finish this and get the courage to show it here

Thanks for all the help to all of you!

Its my first song post, so here goes:

Dont Surrender

[marcus_gloom]

Don't Surrender

When you are lonely
And it's cold and damp outside
I will comfort you
Baby, there's no need to cry

I won't let you fall,
The moment you lose control,
I'll come running,
I will catch you,
Don't you ever worry love

Don't surrender, not now
Cause' you don't have to be alone
Don't surrender, I'm here
And we're almost there, my love

As the night falls down
And the haze just fills the air,
You can take rest within my arms
My baby don't be scared

I won't let you fall,
The moment you lose control,
I'll come running,
I will catch you,
Don't you ever worry now

Don't surrender, not now
Cause' I don't want to be alone
Don't surrender, I'm here
And we're almost there,

And as we face the world,
Forever, I will hold you...

Don't surrender, not now
There's no need to be alone
Don't surrender, I'm here
And we're almost there, my love...

(Copyright JMQU April 2009)

[The Reverend 48]

MG this is a real 5 star piece of work
 Great Production, great playing and vox.
lets hear more

[Geir]

A wonderful song Marcus!!!! and production/arrangement is really beautiful!! Great playing and singing !!

G.

[Jim1970]

Really Beautiful piece!!

Jim

[launched]

Wow - there's so much I like about this song. Love the way it builds up, and great job with the drum arrangement. Vocals sound great and so did the rhythm and solo.

Super work!

Mark

[Ferryman_1957]

Very good first post. It's clear you've worked hard on this, great production values and it works really well. You've clearly got to grips with the MBR, well done. The chorus is crying out for some backing vox IMO, especially the "Don't surrender" part. Might be worth a try.....

Cheers,

Nigel

[OsCKilO]

This is put together so well!

[Bluesberry]

Yes sir that is the goods, from the first guitar strums, then the great lyrics start, you have my full attention.  Great use of drums, great build up, great guitar playing, great everything, I really love this song.  Really great job. Great job panning, leveling all the background guitars, great sounding guitar solo, I cant stop complimenting you on this song.  This is my new favorite song from this site.  You have my full attention, I look forward to your next post for sure.

[marcus_gloom]

Thanks to everytbody for all the nice feedback. It really is something when one receives approval from fellow music-lovers like you.

A few months ago I almost gave up on the MBR because of the very busy work schedule but this site really helped me to push on through.