Concrete Ocean

[OsCKilO]

Songwriting Sessions at "Crisis Skylight" (Homeless Charity: London) today.


Theme was "A Place"... I Chose home... Or what I understand of it...

Concrete Ocean
Tharek Ali Mokbul 2015

-Lyrics-

Home is where I fell down
It's where I was raised up
Home is where the start was
It's where it will end

Many places
Lifetimes of change
Passing faces
Sharing my name

Tell me where my home is
Tell me yet again
Tell me where my heart was
It's lost it's voice again

New found freedom
Traded for a place
Concrete Ocean
Washed away in rain

Sold our souls for six pence
Went bad over bonds
Pennies made of pretence
Kindling for the old

Many changes
Made quick in pain
Airs and Graces
Seats on a Train

Make a promise, Keep it...
The Simple Cell....
Plant a seed then reap it...
Flowers cut, Petals dried....

Love so precious..
Mirror cracked so fine...
My best wishes...
Changing every time...

[Blooby]

So, so very good to hear from you again, my friend! Always dug your lyrics, and this is no exception. As for the music, I immediately grabbed my acoustic off the stand and started to noodle along. Some signal-clipping here, but it doesn't get in the way of your tune.

Nice.

Blooby

[Oldrottenhead]

gaun yersel ma son!

[Groundy]

Nice one, as Blooby said its so good to hear from you again.....
well done........


Alex

[chapperz66]

Great to hear from you - and with such a good song too.

Paul

[Geir]

I miss you my friend !!!

So good to hear from you again !

As always you touch me with your words and music !!



peace !!!

[Redler]

Touching lyrics and melodic vocals! Your voice is just brilliant! More please!!

I've missed you Tharek!

[Johnny Robbo]

Touching lyrics and melodic vocals!

I'll second that... A great song. As someone who struggles to write lyrics, I envy anyone who makes it seem so effortless as this. Your vocals are magic, too

[Flash Harry]

Welcome home Bro.

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Great to have you back man, I've missed you.  Willie