*** Turn Around ***

Started by Nelson, August 08, 2015, 07:06:33 AM

AndyR

I LOVE this - what a song. I love the verses, the lyrics, the vocal melodies, the delivery, the chords and the groove. The chorus is pretty good too - but I'm a sucker for these verses.

Love it.
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   All that I need
Is just a piece of paper
To say a few lines
Make up my mind
So she can read it later
When I'm gone

- BRM Gibb
     
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Flash Harry

Kerpow - right between the ears and right to the heart.

Every song you write pokes at raw wounds, every one is approached with trepidation, every one worth the journey. This is no exception, gently delivered, beautifully written, with a huge payload.

And your rich wonderful voice delivering it all. Superb.

I'm a fan.
We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different
- Kurt Vonnegut.

SwanSong

Great song great production marvelous vocals
loved the video . thanks 4 sharing great job NEIL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kenny mac

Back for another listen,this really is a brilliant song.
Fantastic.
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Lurker

This is a great song!  The lyrics really hit a nerve.  This all comes together so well: melody, instrumentation, vocals.  The video knocks this into another category.  Well done!

Vanncad

Wow Nelson I am so glad I found this one. That is truly a great song.
The lyrics and melody just fit so perfectly. I would almost be willing to bet it was one one of those songs that just came to you (my apologies if it wasn't). If not, you certianly make it seem effortless and from the heart.

I loved the video too. You must have really put some time into that. Fits the song perfectly.

Very well done sir. My hat is off to you.
It ain't pretty being easy.

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artokh74

Loved this. Great storytelling and your voice is really perfect for this type of sound and song.  Reminds me a bit of some Dylan albums from the seventies..New Morning or Planet Waves perhaps. The loose piano was particularly cool.

Hope we get that imaginary album sometime.


Mike_S

You got a great voice, it was made for singing. Good songwriting too.

Cheers
Mike
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Geir

This is so good that it hurts !!!

I hope you realise what a gem of a song  you've made here. The storytelling, the music, the performance ... it all works so well together ! PERFECT !!!

I'm a fan !!! 
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Oh well ........

chapperz66

This is such a good song! 

No.

It is an awesome song.

That's what it is.

Awesome.

Paul