Alone in the Darkness

Started by thetworegs, January 16, 2015, 12:26:03 PM

thetworegs

I'm off out tonight for a drink with a few friends but not til 9 so i thought i'd try to write a song and i think i have . i think i'll revisit it later to re-do but for now it will have to do. Hope you enjoy!! A heart-breaker for a Friday night....
Alone in all that Darkness

I don't know what to say to you now
Everything has got kinda confused
My emotions well there in turmoil
There kinda feeling over used

In the night time in all that darkness
I feel so lost and alone
Where is it going where are you leading me
Am I really gonna be on my own

In this crazy time That were living through
You are always on my mind
Your sending me a little crazy
But at least I have you in here with me in my mind

In the night time in all that darkness
I feel so lost and alone
Where is it going where are you leading me
Am I really gonna be on my own

Break

I've told you I don't know what say to you
I don't know how I'm gonna get you to change you mind
How I can keep you here with me
When all you want to do is leave my side

In the night time in all that darkness
I feel so lost and alone
Where is it that your leading me
Am I really gonna leave me on my own

I can't believe that you'd do that to me
After all those years of our love
Are you really gonna leave me cold
Living this life without your love

In the night time in all that darkness
I feel so lost and alone
Where is it going where are you leading me
Am I really gonna be on my own
Alone in the darkness
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SwanSong

Always a great honor to be first comment on your song.s this is
a great ballad sort of sound very powerful and well presented vocals
u truly are gifted when it comes to singing very powerful . I especially
liked the guitar in this great job NEIL.!

bruno

Powerful and a sad tune. Very well performed, great vocals.
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Ferryman_1957

Great stuff. Excellent vocals and a nice powerful ballad. It works really well, definitely worth revisiting but it is very effective in this stripped down version. I presume you performed it live? It comes over really well and your voice is fantastic as always.

steelguitar

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Love your lyrics!

Your songwriting has a great quality for me : pretty melody and adequate choice of simple chords in a more complex/subtle arrangement...

I feel emotion and soul in your vocals. Your fantastic voice have his great own qualities, just a little few broken...

Make me think about Bob Dylan for the rythm and the "phrasé" as we say in french (phrasing in english?).

Love you performance as it is, even if you want to redo it.

A great listen for me.

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A lots of heart and soul on this! A cool power ballad - nice job!
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AndyR

Love the stripped down feel. Excellent vocal and lyrics. Kinda speaks to one :)
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Farrell Jackson

A well written song and solo performance Trevor.....you definitely need to keep going with it because it's a good one!

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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

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