All my promises - new song

[MoreMuSic]

Hello friends,

here comes a new song "all my promises" - it is my first song with singing, which i have finished.
Caution ! - be not be shocked due to my bad german pronunciation, but i gave my best  .

I have seen that the lyrics are usually printed - here they come
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"All my promises"
I.   Verse
Em            Em
In a world without any worth
Am7                       Em
You run for  life – no further care   
Cmaj7                         Em7
Youre´n a hurry and youre restless
Cmaj7                 Em7             E7sus4
but dont forget all your promises
Cmaj7
and slow down.....

II.   Verse
The veils are drawn above your soul
You rush for live – no further care
Youre´n a hurry and youre restless
but dont forget all your promises
and slow down.......

III.   Verse
The white sails of our ship are furled
In tall thoughts you know the endless space
Youre´n a hurry and youre restless

IV. Solo
 
V. Bridge
all my promises - are a providence
all my promises - be more conscious
yeaaaaaaaah- no more  hesitate

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I have recorded the song at my home studio. I am using Sonar X3 producer and the drums comes from Addictive Drums. The resolution of the song is set to low, so it fits into the size restriction of songcrafters.org.
I am not so happy about that, but happy enough to know that this is a great platform to share music ideas with
like-minded friends 


have fun
Sven

[danieldesete]

Hi Sven, and welcome to this site.
Nice rocker you have posted there, it was really time you started singing, you voice is just incredible, powerful and musical.  (What a Hey hey in the end, your neighbours must go nuts !)
And I love that lead guitar tone, clean and warm, somewhere between The Cure and Pink Floyd (I hope you don't feel offended).
Please post many more
Daniel

[Gritter]

This is cool. Good song with sweet vocals and a bit of a Pink Floyd vibe. I'm digging it!

[Geir]

Great song Sven.

I too hear the Floyd influence, but it's still uniquely you!

Powerful music.

Love it

[kenny mac]

Cool song,definitely a Gilmore style playing technique here.
Nice sound and mix there.
Well done.

[Jarle]

Great song Sven. Nice to hear you sing. I like how it falls down at the slow down line. Some really nice lead guitar and fills. I like the arrangement.

[Hook]

I dig it brother, you sound great!
Rock On!

[IanR]

What a cool sound. Give us more!

[MoreMuSic]

Hello,

i have rerecorded my song "all my promises" - i am working on my vocals and hope that its better now.
https://soundcloud.com/meyerhofer-1-1/all-my-promises



Have fun 
Sven