Bass Notes

[allysonmarie]

A poem of mine put to music. Not a very new recording but I think about these lines often these days.

Fragile but ugly
So by all means – break.
Everyone will be angry if you wait.

Never blessed by a breath of wings above...
They know how cold you are; no one expects your love.
No one cares for what you've done
And no one fears your setting sun.
 
The bass notes we've become with scars upon our strings.
Snap away – find a death in change.
You would take no sound at all
Over the same.

[IanR]

Dark, deep and passionate.

[allysonmarie]

Dark, deep and passionate.

Thank you for listening. My brother knows of ways to help layer other sounds into my tracks so I'm considering this one as a song to start that work with.

[Groundy]

Nice one Allysonmarie......Alex

[Hilary]

Dark, deep and passionate.

yep . . .

[Hook]

Love it Allysonmarie, really excellent poem!
Rock On!

[IanR]

Dark, deep and passionate.

Thank you for listening. My brother knows of ways to help layer other sounds into my tracks so I'm considering this one as a song to start that work with.

Good luck with that. I wish I had a brother to help me when I was starting out - you are lucky. It doesn't have to be complex or very expensive.  If you need any other advice, there are heaps of people on Songcrafters to work with.

cheers,

Ian

[StephenM]

I have been rather intrigued with some of this artists music, especially the vocals and lyrics... this was OTD bump... but the lyrics are so darned powerful I just had to share it with someone else that might dig it..
AllysonMarie has music on line that I bought some of...

I think I may try and cover this for some open mics... I'd like to see what I might do on here with an acoustic guitar or perhaps singing with the bass... since the name is that...