Post-LONG lay off here's a new song from me [Title: 'I Don't Want To Know']

Started by Super 8, August 21, 2014, 07:31:33 PM

Tangled Wires

I like this, almost felt that it could have lasted another minute or so longer, probably due to the fact that I was enjoying it so much!.

The songs structure is very strong in the way that it slowly builds from the gentle opening, and then returns back briefly to finish it all off, and there are some nice subtle musical additions along the way adding variation throughout.

Nice vocal too, smooth as you like!


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IanR

What a wonderful song.  It has a great laid back feel to it.  And nice use of dynamics.

Great work

Ian






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Hook


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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

Super 8

Note In My Pocket
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Thanks for the kind words folks! OK, here's the final mix for this one. I just tidied up a few loose ends & smoothed things out a bit so I'm now hoping this one's 'in the can' as they say! I really appreciate everyone's thoughts & comments here. I'm fairly pleased with how this one's turned out. CHEERS! TRiP 8)  


Hilary

Hey Paul - I'm so glad you are back to writing and posting again, I'm a big fan and this matched my expectations. I look forward to more :D
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comme ci, comme ça

Farrell Jackson

WOW I love it! Besides the fine songwriting, I dig all the fine details you've put in this song. The country-ish styled guitar fills are perfectly played and effected. You have a sort of Brian Wilson (In My Room) type of atmosphere to this mix and that's good!

Farrell
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Farrell Jackson


Rayon Vert


Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

SwanSong

Great vocal.s kind of that NEILSON style from the 70s. great production
and expressive singing and good music behind the vocals congrats well
done NEIL.!!

Ella

That really sounds professional. I also like that feeling in this and love your voice. Wanna hear more!


cuthbert

Meant to comment earlier: loved the slide guitar and the mix of piano and acoustic guitars - super-catchy chorus, too! And nice bridge! :)

Nice one, man.
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