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Final Say

Started by allysonmarie, August 18, 2014, 07:01:36 PM

allysonmarie

09 - Final Say
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I could only do a few takes of this at the time, so this is pretty much an improvised recording. Wanted to share it anyways. I wrote it out of another low moment I was trying to turn around.   

I may have fallen
I might be displaced
And yes, for a moment
I may have shifted my gaze

But make no mistake
This is my game.
It goes my way,
I always have the final say.

And for all you do, honey...
The blood stain and scar-
The given breath you are-
Take it too far

This time I want the truth
My only rule, honey...
Make sure you leave me
Broken through

Rata-tat-tat

I dig it!!! You have a great voice and your skills on the keys are stellar!!!
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Tascam DP-24

Groundy

Another hit for me Allysonmarie, well done.............Alex

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Boss BR-800
 
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Boss Micro BR


If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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allysonmarie

I'm grateful you could take a quick listen. I hope to have time soon to work with an idea like this sound for some other lyrics I've had sitting around.

Jarle

Another great song allysonmarie. I would love to hear this with a better recording and maybe a bigger arrangement.
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Tangled Wires

Very, very nice, the piano melody is very interesting and has an almost slight staccato rhythm in places which creates, in my opinion, a slightly more minimalistic sound to your normal free flowing fuller playing style.

The power, as always, is in your song writing and performance, and yet another prime example here.


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SwanSong

ALL of your music has that special sound special quality
'and great vocals always a great listen keep singing and
sharing cheers NEIL!

bruno

Another excellent song Allyson.
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I'm sorry you have low moments but if it leads to good songs then it's a cross well bourne.  Excellent.  Willie
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