And For What?

Started by allysonmarie, August 07, 2014, 07:43:44 PM

allysonmarie

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I just got news that I failed yet another interview and wasn't chosen for a job I really had my hopes in. This song is a bit more than a year old, written after another rejection of this type and is specifically about the whole interview process and my emotions as I'm caught up in those moments, knowing I'm being judged and having so little control when all is said and done.


I showed up, sweetly.
So clean and decently draped,
A smile and lifted gaze,
With all things acceptable and
Perfectly placed.

Yet, once the uniform questions began to be spoken
I was punctured by the edge.
Life and death between your pen and written,
Ripping at my flesh.
Sickened to feel I am a threat – I am the unwanted.

My soul is handed over
All is done.
Lacking faith for the risks I take...
And again,
Meaninglessly overcome.

Hook

Nice song, great lyrics. Don't worry, the right thing will come to you!
Rock On!

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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

Tangled Wires

I haven't had the "pleasure" of a job interview for about 8 years now, and can't say i've missed the experience

Beautiful song with some very poignant lyrics delivered in your inimitable style, and that wonderful sparse piano arrangement provides the perfect and slightly downbeat backdrop.

Keep your chin up and stay positive!


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allysonmarie

Quote from: Tangled Wires on August 08, 2014, 04:39:37 AMKeep your chin up and stay positive!

The #1 challenge of my life...lol Thank you for listening. Very appreciative for your feedback. 

SwanSong

Beautiful vocals and so expressive. great dynamics . good presence
superb modulation breath control. and v ery soulful singing . keep
singing and sharing 2 thumbs up NEIL..!

allysonmarie

Quote from: SwanSong on August 09, 2014, 04:03:13 PMBeautiful vocals and so expressive. great dynamics . good presence
superb modulation breath control. and v ery soulful singing . keep
singing and sharing 2 thumbs up NEIL..!

Thanks so much for your feedback. This is one I would redo with real studio equipment if I ever got the opportunity to...lol

Groundy

A little cracker from The Random Dozen...

Alex.

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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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